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A Couer Ouvert - Heart To Heart

Your voice
fills my cavity
with the fullness
that streams
from vast desert skies
where raindrops fall
like tumbling notes
pelting my heart
with pitter-patter rhythms
of a grand Aria arising
from tremulous rainstorms
that quench
my irresistible thirst
for your enchantment
I drink soaking wet
from the artistry
of resonate nightingales
breached on the precipice
of wonderment of us

Your touch
carries me
across
thresholds
of heaven
earth
universe
for the hearts capacity
to hold a singular place
or direction
for the home of
the infinite being
of us

Your kiss
journeys
to the farthest
part of me
the innermost
mind of me
the library
of novels from
a million stories
with words
boundless and eternal
about us


Rewritten February 22,2022
Winter Love Poetry Contest
Sponsored by JCB Brul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Marcum Wong Avatar
February 25, 2022 at 8:19 PM
Your voice, your touch, your kiss. How romantic and creative this poem is Lonna. Congratulations on your wonderful First Place win. Blessings xxoo
Chiri Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 12:30 AM
Amazing write congrats on your win! And thank you for entering my contest!;)
Blodgett Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 11:52 AM
Much appreciation Brenda. Love all your comments and the contest as well. Thank you. Lonna
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 9:11 PM
I like how the added flair expounds that, if it stood alone to verse, is just as sweet -- Best wishes, indeed!~@wk
Blodgett Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 10:24 PM
Thanks for the encouragement and inspiration. Lonna
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