Andrea Dietrich Poet Tanka

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A Cosmic Beak

A cosmic beak pecks
 
an explosion of maroon

that converges with

galactic vastnesss where stars

brightly splatter midnight blue.


Feb 20, 2019 for the Tell Me- What Do You See-- Poetry Contest
of James Edward Lee Sr.

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Paul Marc February 23, 2019 at 8:39 PM Such a beautiful poem - congrats on your win!

Alexis Y. February 22, 2019 at 10:42 PM Hi Andrea, You painted a lovely picture with words. It looks amazing. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Joseph May February 21, 2019 at 9:18 PM Very nicely done andrea..gl in in the contest..

Noel Flater February 21, 2019 at 3:12 PM I like the cosmic beak, like the breaking of an earth, star birth. I've poemed about nature, this inspires me to poem about the stars

Jennifer Proxenos February 21, 2019 at 12:52 PM Hi Andrea, Lost for a description but really like yours - might give it a go Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Jack Horne February 21, 2019 at 11:59 AM oh, love these descriptions

Tom Cunningham February 21, 2019 at 2:20 AM Great description Andrea, I'm still looking, the first picture he put up was better than this one. Tom.

Rhona Mcferran February 20, 2019 at 10:12 PM Beautiful and creative... love it!!! ;)

Arturo Michael February 20, 2019 at 6:53 PM The sprinkling stars of midnight blues...hope in despair...