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A Contraindication Or Two

because i think outside the box ~ makes people think i’m unorthodox what’s wrong with backward clocks ~ just makes a >dud< palindromic paradox

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Sand Blown

Date: 3/10/2022 6:12:00 PM

...con 'trained-diction' is carnival barker sales talk too....the unexpected.....decor of....the twilight zone.....nice write...... ......stans sand

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/11/2022 12:40:00 AM

Indeed Stan, the twilight zone is where I spend at lot of my time going backwards, while most of the world believe they are going forward, cheers David

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 3/10/2022 12:55:00 PM

Very clever write....and I like the backward clock~perfect for a fantasy for children's book. :)Paulette

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/10/2022 1:02:00 PM

Thank you Paulette, ain’t life full of paradoxes, I probably point them out more than I should, to my own detriment, this one was fun though, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/10/2022 12:41:00 PM

Nothing wrong with zigging when everyone else is zagging. If you haven't already gone, have a great time away David. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/10/2022 12:53:00 PM

That’s me Tom I tend to go with the flow and against the tide all at once, not gone yet, cheers David