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NOTE:thoughts by Dilly Dally-form by me

a beach ball stuck in the rafters of the pool it's been there for the 7 years I've been coming here It contains air from the lungs of an unknown person an essence that rests here as though they never left I wonder of all the places I've left pieces of me caught sight of but unknown & recalled gently my presence has never left but I never returned it's similar with a long lost friend who has a memory or an item I made a saying or dance I embodied they kept some others I'd like to ask - who was I in that moment of my life such fragments are more than the air I breathed on an unremembered day perhaps such are the reason people smile holding a memory in their hands & conjure back as I oft do small links to the long forgotten pieces of me of a someone who existed ...then

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Date: 8/14/2023 4:37:00 PM
This contest peaked your interest, Brian! Congratulations on 3rd place! ..it’s been coming here for the seven years I’ve been here. You contemplate…we all leave pieces of ourselves behind.
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Date: 8/13/2023 11:53:00 AM
Congratulations Brian on your placement. I enjoyed the flow of this and the way the last line left longing in the air from the cadence and rhythm which had come before it. Thank you for putting your stamp on the prompt :)
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