NOTE:thoughts by Dilly Dally-form by me
a beach ball stuck in the rafters of the pool it's been there for the 7 years I've been coming here It contains air from the lungs of an unknown person an essence that rests here as though they never left I wonder of all the places I've left pieces of me caught sight of but unknown & recalled gently my presence has never left but I never returned it's similar with a long lost friend who has a memory or an item I made a saying or dance I embodied they kept some others I'd like to ask - who was I in that moment of my life such fragments are more than the air I breathed on an unremembered day perhaps such are the reason people smile holding a memory in their hands & conjure back as I oft do small links to the long forgotten pieces of me of a someone who existed ...then
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