A Confession To a Bartender

A confession to the 
bartender
The one with the drink in 
her hand
The one who looks just 
like my bottle...
A glass would do
Or make it two
So i can pour out my 
heart to you...
So i can make my 
bitterness come 
through...
You remind me of my 
lady
The only difference is 
 your are tenderness
You never took my heart 
the way she did
you never played me the 
way she did....
She was everything to 
me
That's why i took her to 
where i would be
Somewhere dark where 
no eyes can see
Somewhere i could meet 
her again....
Somewhere she won't 
hurt me again.....
My secrets i give to to 
you my bartender......
Secrets of a large dark 
heart....
 

CONTEST; confessions to 
a bartender
by; Natalie :) The Rogue 
Rhymer
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Lucas Mcclure Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 10:12 AM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write! Lori
Brown Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 5:23 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in P.D.'s "Long Poem" contest Prince. Love, Carol
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May 23, 2012 at 4:54 AM
Quite interesting. Take care and stay safe, Jancark
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May 22, 2012 at 10:21 PM
Prince, Congratulations with your awesome long long poem! Thank you for supporting my contest. Good night ~*~ALWAYS * the one and only :-) PD
May Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 8:13 PM
congrats on your win Prince
Williams Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 2:45 PM
Prince congrast on your win..david
Kearley Avatar
April 27, 2012 at 3:46 PM
This reads like a true story...Hmmmm?
Dietrich Avatar
October 30, 2011 at 4:06 PM
wow, a very dark one. I like this!!!
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