A Condescending Friend

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She says bow down before me and I will be your friend, She will talk to me only if she can condescend. With no hesitation she will try to put me in my place, This is not a friend… or someone with any grace.

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Funom Makama

Date: 5/26/2016 1:42:00 PM

Great lines, wonderful flows, indicative of a soul deep mind. An excellent seven well deserved.

Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 5/26/2016 1:47:00 PM

Thank you Funom, I appreciate the reply!

Jan Allison

Date: 5/23/2016 5:07:00 PM

Not someone you want to have in your life Brenda:-( hugs Jan xx

Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 5/23/2016 5:26:00 PM

No, you are right Jan. Thanks.

Walter T. Ashe

Date: 5/23/2016 3:23:00 PM

Not a friend at all! Grace ascends! This poem imparts important words to keep in mind and live with! Will be keeping this in mind! Thank you for this!

Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 5/23/2016 3:31:00 PM

Thanks Walter for your comment. It is unfortunate to experience this, but many of us have.