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A Condescending Friend

She says bow down before me and I will be your friend,
She will talk to me only if she can condescend.
With no hesitation she will try to put me in my place,
This is not a friend… or someone with any grace.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Makama Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 1:42 PM
Great lines, wonderful flows, indicative of a soul deep mind. An excellent seven well deserved.
Mcgrath Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 1:47 PM
Thank you Funom, I appreciate the reply!
Allison Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 5:07 PM
Not someone you want to have in your life Brenda:-( hugs Jan xx
Mcgrath Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 5:26 PM
No, you are right Jan. Thanks.
Ashe Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 3:23 PM
Not a friend at all! Grace ascends! This poem imparts important words to keep in mind and live with! Will be keeping this in mind! Thank you for this!
Mcgrath Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 3:31 PM
Thanks Walter for your comment. It is unfortunate to experience this, but many of us have.
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