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A Concussion Or Coffee

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Jeff Connelly

Date: 7/24/2019 1:49:00 PM

I do love this truly Maureen. How did I miss such a recent post of yours? By now you know I'm goofy but the first title that popped on my head was "Caffiend". "Stupid is as stupid does" or whatever he said: Forrest Trump. I do hope your dog is alright.

Jeff Connelly
Date: 7/25/2019 5:15:00 PM

Interesting how one's brain works. If I don't take my meds my mind thinks way too much. Multiple conversations going all at once; and the most interesting thing I find is, even while typing this, music is always playing in my head. That can be pretty cool sometimes, but when tune loops it becomes quite maddening. Say, the first four notes of Beethoven's 5th played over and over endlessly.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/25/2019 7:40:00 AM

I tweaked the title. A big part of my experience is brain flooding; I have no filters. Light, sound, texture, everything is on max, picture a soundboard with every knob on high. The dog, her toe just cost my rent ;p

Charles Messina

Date: 7/23/2019 8:21:00 AM

Morning, day and night. I drink it all day long. I can actually have a cup at midnight and still fall asleep.Wow, you used to add 7 sugars..you may have just as well added some coffee to your sugar. (lol) Nice one!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/23/2019 3:47:00 PM

Lol! Back then I hated coffee, but loved the caffeine. ;), xomo!