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A Composition of Love

A Composition of Love Strings so tuned in harmony, the music that we hear Sweet within our open hearts, symphonic and so clear The happy sunrise brightly sings a duet with the dawn As hummingbirds and meadowlarks join in to sing along Instrumental wishes float in dreams that we shall play Melodies of perfect love composed this springtime day Good morning Soupers

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Heidi Sands

Date: 12/29/2018 7:53:00 PM

This is exactly as it should be! So nice! :)

Chris Green
Date: 12/31/2018 3:19:00 PM

Thank you my friend

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/5/2017 2:59:00 PM

Yes this is a mother nature's way to play her music,that we hear e very morning.My favourite is the sounds of the doves.I like the way they sing.As well as other birds.

Chris Green
Date: 5/5/2017 3:11:00 PM

I enjoy them too Darlene. Thanks so much for your wonderful comment

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/5/2017 2:59:00 PM

The sun plays on its harp strings...The dawn... brings a sweet warmth...Her heart beats close to your heart...Her soft lips sing a song. :)..Inspiring beauty.

Chris Green
Date: 5/5/2017 3:11:00 PM

I always smile when you stop by because your wonderful comments are like music to my ears my sweet friend. Thank you so much.

Lenna Walker

Date: 5/5/2017 10:50:00 AM

"With perfect rhyme and rhythm, you have painted us a place .... where love is deep and lasting within the human race". Always a pleasure to read you.... GOOD MORNING Chris !!

Chris Green
Date: 5/5/2017 11:10:00 AM

Good morning Lenna, I am so happy you stopped by today. Thank you for always being so nice to me. I am happy you liked my little poem.

Maria Williams

Date: 5/5/2017 9:44:00 AM

Good morning Chris - It 12:37 am in Australia so time to turn in - but not without reading your latest. It breathes musical beauty. You must dream in verse, speak verse all day and close your day with verse in order to compose such inspirational pieces and so quickly too. It has to be a 7. thanks for sharing ...Maria

Chris Green
Date: 5/5/2017 10:38:00 AM

Thank you Maria and sweet dreams my friend. Yes I do and it annoys the hell out of my employees. :) Just kidding, I am happy you liked this one. Good night Maria.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/5/2017 8:14:00 AM

Good morning Chris...3:12 am so I am off to sleep. Have a lovely day. Your poem is so cheerful and inspiring. Nite, Aloha, Connie : ) 7

Chris Green
Date: 5/5/2017 10:37:00 AM

Connie, I hope you have the most beautiful dreams as you sleep. Thank you once again for your kindness.

Tim Smith

Date: 5/5/2017 7:29:00 AM

your love is contagious...have a good morning

Chris Green
Date: 5/5/2017 10:36:00 AM

Thanks so much Tim, you too.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/5/2017 7:27:00 AM

Melodious awakening of the day dear friend, Chris! Marvelously written! A 7 my friend!

Chris Green
Date: 5/5/2017 10:36:00 AM

Thanks so very much Demetrios for your nice thoughts.

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 5/5/2017 7:05:00 AM

Thank you so much for this perfect way to start the day with nature's strings flowing so close to the heart, like a babbling brook brimming with joy:) Amitiés

Chris Green
Date: 5/5/2017 10:36:00 AM

Thank you Anne Marie because your kind words are always the perfect way for me to start my day. I am happy you liked this one

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/5/2017 7:00:00 AM

Good morning Chris, This is sooo beautiful and music to my ears. A without a doubt seven: -) Alexis

Chris Green
Date: 5/5/2017 10:35:00 AM

Thank you so very much my dear friend. I am happy you liked this and thrilled to see you again. I have missed you Alexis.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/5/2017 6:26:00 AM

Good Morning Chris. This entry is a composition for your words do sing because they read so smoothly with flow. You truly combine love and nature wonderfully for in so many ways they are one. Anyone who sees and knows beauty around them is blessed. And to have the love in the other sense is the icing on the cake that gives meaning. To this we so called soupers say good morning back to you. Well done entirely.

Chris Green
Date: 5/5/2017 10:34:00 AM

Thanks so very much my souper friend. :) And good morning Lisa Ricci poetess extraordinaire. :) My friend, once again your beautiful words about my poetry touch my heart and my soul. I always look forward to your visits.