A Commander of Love

my treasure is my love
my love is my treasure
my treasure
will capture your heart
you always keep my heart at peace
favorite
my heart is at peace
when thunder is loud
even if the light of lightning is scary
I will catch you
I have three treasures:
honesty from my sigh:
loyalty from my tears:
conscience from my poetry,
dedicate to you
you always say
“Before you become one with me, be one with everyone”
and along with
they disappear
leaving heavy rains alone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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