A Cold Stiff Shadow

A candle light

in a dark smokey room

Flames dancing

on the walls across the roof


A twinkling star 

high up in the sky

Suddenly falls away

into the space yard of goodbyes


Dreams do die

in the bitter struggle for gain

The last high

usually's never the same


Until it's over

Only the drugs remain

And a cold stiff shadow 

Payment for fortune and fame
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Acquah Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 3:40 AM
What a great write, made me curious enough to find out more.!
Michael Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 9:50 AM
I'm amazing you gravitated to this poem... of one foot on Earth and the other in Heaven
Foster Avatar
August 26, 2019 at 10:50 AM
The payment is always a few cents higher than the coins in our purse. A poignant write my friend. So well written. Excellent. Ann
Lamoureux Avatar
June 24, 2019 at 9:41 AM
I was a fan. Well expressed piece! Thanks for your visit.
Michael Avatar
June 24, 2019 at 12:04 PM
You're welcome Richard...I was a fan too...Thanks for stopping by....
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 24, 2019 at 4:30 AM
It is such a tragic loss for a young man who had a wonderful future to share with us all. Your poem expresses that loss so poignantly and beautifully Arturo. I hope this is a top winner.
Michael Avatar
June 24, 2019 at 12:02 PM
It's a serious message...especially for those it may touch...Thanks Connie...All the best
Romios Avatar
June 23, 2019 at 5:08 PM
Oh, I loved River Phoenix so much! Your poem is more than eloquent. People do not know that any number of drugs are served at Hollywood parties, as easily as Hor d'dourves.{SP}. Multiple drugs plus booze can end any life. My message? Alcohol is a drug that few bat an eyelash at and it kills many. Sorry River is gone. Thanks Arturo.
Michael Avatar
June 23, 2019 at 5:18 PM
Completely correct...Alcohol is a big boss...and is usually combined with some deadly ninja drugs...we must find away to saddle those wild horses...
Wolf Avatar
June 23, 2019 at 4:05 PM
Nice eulogy for yet another in a litany of entertainers who succumbed to drugs. The beat goes on...and on. :) gw
Michael Avatar
June 23, 2019 at 4:24 PM
I've seen too many talented kids go down the drain of life...most of them unknown...something must be done...
Labyrinth Avatar
June 23, 2019 at 3:09 PM
Such a beautiful soul lost. Some controversy though over whether drugs were taken by River of his own volition, or he was murdered. Interesting when you look into the background of River and the forensics. Nevertheless, sad, heart breaking and an example of abuse (not just the drugs, but the other types of abuse that go hand in hand ...particularly in that culture/Hollywood, L.A. and fame). Strong message in your poem, whichever way it is read. L
Michael Avatar
June 23, 2019 at 4:33 PM
In his case you might be right...but others believe its the stepping stone to fame and fortune... a terrible mistake indeed...
Labyrinth Avatar
June 23, 2019 at 3:09 PM
https://medium.com/@jocwriters/the-curious-death-of-river-phoenix-88e47a0fa24b
Pandit Avatar
June 23, 2019 at 2:16 PM
Heartbreaking imagery in your video..equally so in your poem..unfortunately it happens so frequently..well depicted story, Arturo.
Michael Avatar
June 23, 2019 at 4:35 PM
Thank you Vijay...anything to save another talented soul from destroying their lives...
Sergi Avatar
June 23, 2019 at 1:43 PM
Hi Arturo: A poignant verse , Arturo. Some escape to drugs and some can't escape from drugs.
Michael Avatar
June 23, 2019 at 1:49 PM
Some flights take you on a one way trip...life isn't easy...but the lessons taught are before us...if we choose to learn...
Cunningham Avatar
June 23, 2019 at 1:00 PM
Sad verse Arturo, some can't cope with fame and get drawn into drugs. Tom
Michael Avatar
June 23, 2019 at 4:41 PM
I guess it hard to get to the top and even harder to stay there...we're in a body, and that body can only take so much...
Wanter Avatar
June 23, 2019 at 11:47 AM
So very sad. Still, none of us know the whole of a person.
Michael Avatar
June 23, 2019 at 4:39 PM
Correct...nevertheless too many people are mistaken...
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