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A Cold Night's Reminder

The wind breaks over me, And I feel it in my bones. But none of this would matter, If I had you to hold. With the cold as a reminder, Of our time together, You are now miles away, But, this is your sweater. We look up at the sky, Through clouds and city lights, And that moonlight, I can picture it, Sparkling in your eyes. I do not have to be near you, To know deep inside, That those sparkling eyes, Are ever so wide. I look up at that moon, And I swear I can see it. Although our bodies have, Our hearts will never split. We share that moon, And we look at it together. Though miles separate us, We share the same weather. When I feel lonely, Most often at night, I go outside, And look out into the chilled sky… In that moon shining down, I can feel your eyes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/30/2014 7:17:00 AM
I really liked that.Great poem.
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Date: 11/8/2014 12:51:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Hannah - I choose your first very well written poem - Great ! - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/6/2014 2:26:00 PM
Hey Hannah, Such a Lovely write. Enjoyed this piece. Great stuff Kevin
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