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a cold haiku

desolate bleakness a single soft bird singing... in the warm center

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 3/18/2022 10:05:00 PM
"single soft bird singing" - Great image. Congratulations!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 3/19/2022 2:18:00 PM
Thank you!!!
Date: 2/22/2022 9:04:00 AM
Good one. I enjoyed reading this winner today. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
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L. J. Carber
Date: 2/22/2022 10:19:00 AM
Thanks Sara, much appreciated!
Date: 1/18/2021 10:48:00 AM
Congrats, L. J. It was surely an interesting image.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/19/2021 8:30:00 AM
Thanks Andrea-- have a much blessed 2021!
Date: 1/16/2021 2:58:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats LJ hope you are much recovered from your fall:-) hugs jan xx
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/18/2021 8:37:00 AM
Very thoughtful Jan! Yes, thank God, nothing broke.
Date: 1/11/2021 1:54:00 PM
super imagery, many congrats on your win L J;-) hugs Jan xx
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/16/2021 9:15:00 AM
Thank you Jan--sorry for the late reply [had a bad fall]-- have a blessed 2021!
Date: 7/5/2020 11:23:00 PM
Excellent haiku my friend :)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 7/6/2020 12:16:00 PM
Thank you, I'm very happy you liked it.
Date: 12/26/2019 7:27:00 PM
L.J., congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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L. J. Carber
Date: 12/27/2019 9:31:00 AM
Thanks Eve--and may you have a very good 2020!
Date: 12/26/2019 6:03:00 PM
LJ, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with your wonderful haiku, it would have placed higher but you did not put the date written, challenge or sponsor ~
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L. J. Carber
Date: 12/27/2019 9:32:00 AM
Sorry D.H. between the holiday and a couple of 'medical interventions', it must have slipped my mind.
Date: 12/24/2019 10:30:00 PM
Beautifully penned.. Congrats on HM..
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L. J. Carber
Date: 12/25/2019 10:14:00 AM
Thank you, Jenish
Date: 12/24/2019 5:51:00 PM
Great image here. Merry Xmas, and Congrats for your win.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 12/25/2019 10:14:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, and a most joyous Christmas to you and yours!
Date: 12/15/2019 1:32:00 PM
You captured the desolate imagery of cold season beautifully in this haiku, L.J.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 12/25/2019 10:14:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay