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A Cogent Shot

The night was too tide When I sticked with my last So embraced with the maid In the middle of the light She is certain superb of the maids The best choice ever did That moons can't get z's Holding the tilt in the land Winds come to never tire her up Love is meant to inspire her Unaltered blinks at me so pop A smile that creates proper Wounds in thousands won't hurt while the cure is set in her arms Working inside the edges of a heart So strengthened, trials finalize The worlds know we're an ensemble Retreating the light of the couples All the seasons saw us enable Fostered cares blowing in bubbles Skies above and mods on the earth Love betwixt like a pestle to hoe Fly to dream the truth dead to know Where it stands and can't bow By it's ken that both understand With it's mood that all will await Leggers nod with an entire trend But all led in the same cult All is said and many will end Time is a lead to all the hats Idle slaves will bet a bend Love itself will host feasts Who was I love don't Love owns not to lease Frees a tongue to heart a hurt Fights a light to tame the right Sends beams to all the senses Wars freeze and won't retake All is won until it ceases Before it reigns over the lake It fears not the highs and lows A rank dates a rame By its sake a lion miaws The world be owned in zero time A night marries a day The right tremtion killer Angels a demon in a calm way Awakens minds as a sigh healer It wows when it settles A king becomes the best cook A wanderer donates the cattles A vow vedges the vex Love kills to love You enter the gates abnormal Throw the beliefs have Gives power to rely on the real Its not who you love and knows you Its not where you are when she is there too Its not who you are and what you do Its who you love and who loves you. You got shot digest fast Behave as if life is only that Dies when the shooter is absent Down and up the heart is won.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/29/2016 8:02:00 AM
Hey Lakhpin :) - I welcome you to Poetry - Soup :) - Thank you for your first poem, I look forward to many, many more in the future :) - Have fun, meet many "poet" friends :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/27/2016 11:37:00 PM
Lakhpin Muhire, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/26/2016 9:46:00 AM
Emmanuel, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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