A Cog In the Machine

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Psychology in Education (BSc) - Undergraduate, University of York

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*Image of Education by UY. A Cog in The Machine Life advances their kind of entrusting stays, origin of roots possessing foundation, flung to care sprouts variable promises, ~~executes each seed. The great void advents the id of emptiness; launched needs, yet farfetched and demanding the task, contending the fathom fact of dimensions, ~~inception account. Countless bearings operate the mechanism, instants cognitive effortless life makers, quintessential beats absence into the void, ~~marked units of time. Simplistic explanative of a machine, the inner workings of every component, jointly toiling as a singularity, ~~a fitting duty. A pristine canvas lengthens on a tripod, while a sable paintbrush jabs an empty point, visionist Seurat and Signac rethink art, ~~Pointillist purview. A concert hall seasons an orchestra pit, woodwinds, brass, percussion, strings, keyboards, chorale, symphonic blends as a meek piccolo peal, ~~a highest-pitched tune. The world is our stage where we fulfill our roles, all taking part in a scene that is rehearsed, a constant performance since opening night, ~~functioning beings. Inconsequential entity's conjuring queries who's who, what's what drives absoluteness, amassed strays, exacts focus o'er all, for I ... ~~... am the unique one. 2022 May 17 *1st Place* Pick-A-Title, Vol 30 ~~Edward Ibeh: Judged 2022 May 29 *Title #3 HMS; 11,11,11,5 syllables x 32 lines = 8 sapphic stanzas

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Date: 5/30/2022 7:10:00 AM
A very beautiful and detailed writing. Congratulations!
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Hilo Poet
Date: 5/30/2022 9:12:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, for noting that a statement can be meaningful my friend, Aloha~William,
Date: 5/29/2022 5:45:00 PM
William, sincere congratulation on taking first place with your remarkable poetry! You are more than deserving of it.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 5/29/2022 6:34:00 PM
I am truly grateful, Lasaad, for your time and thought-filled expressions my friend, thank you and Aloha~William
Date: 5/29/2022 4:02:00 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this exceptional poem, William:-) Wow! You pull off difficult forms seamlessly!
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Date: 5/29/2022 5:54:00 PM
I’ve come to understand that some perceive poetry forms trump free expressions. Their creators had expressed themselves freely at the time of its inception prior to being a form, whereto, I hope to honor their efforts. Appreciated my friend, Aloha~William
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