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poem submitted to "1447 Your Choice Again" poetry contest, Brian Strand, sponsor, February 26, 2026.

A COAT THAT CAN'T BE RETURNED

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Morning light finds the cracks first~ those rivers mapped by laughter, by squinting at horizons now behind me. My knees complain like rusty hinges, but they still bend. My hands, spotted with time, still remember how to write shorthand, how to cradle a newborn’s head. I collect aches like souvenirs, each one a receipt for living~ the hip that remembers the fall, the shoulder that recalls the weight of carrying someone else. The young sprint past me, their bodies loud with urgency. I linger by the lilacs, learning the art of standing still, the slow art of gathering shadows, and knowing which ones to lean into, which ones to outrun. Aging is marvelous. Aging is strange. Aging is wearing a coat that can’t be returned.
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Gauthier Avatar
March 25, 2026 at 1:20 PM
Such wisdom here ~ lovely. Added to my FAVE's.
Bailey Avatar
February 17, 2026 at 10:50 AM
I love this Sara. Beautifully penned. -B-
Etgen-Baker Avatar
February 26, 2026 at 4:46 AM
awww, thank you!
Maverick Avatar
February 16, 2026 at 11:12 PM
All i can think Is Lord keep us strong For the road has become harder as Age increases, make us effective in The time remaining..Amen.)
Hind Avatar
February 16, 2026 at 9:01 PM
I respect this poem so much. You have beautiful lessons to share. <3
Etgen-Baker Avatar
February 26, 2026 at 4:47 AM
awww, your most kind dear Paige.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 16, 2026 at 8:01 AM
Yup…in it with you…deep! As long as pain is managed, we work with it.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
February 16, 2026 at 5:10 PM
I agree....pain management is the key :-) hugs
Kendrick Avatar
February 16, 2026 at 5:16 AM
Sara B, I like this one as well which to me expresses some of the truly unique life situations that happen to the elderly. Our bodies might be wearing out but our brains and hearts house so many marvelous emotions and memories. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
Etgen-Baker Avatar
February 16, 2026 at 5:11 PM
awww, thank you, Sara K, for appreciating and understanding the value of this poem. Glad you liked it. You made my day, hugs, Sara
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