A Cloudburst In Himalayas

thunderous black clouds 
                                     sinuous blinding lightning
                                     river swells in spate
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gupta Avatar
December 2, 2016 at 5:09 AM
Just a few words have made a big canvas ... very nice haiku ...
Desikachari Avatar
December 2, 2016 at 1:18 PM
Thank you Probir for the nice comment
Wolf Avatar
December 2, 2016 at 12:44 AM
A great Haiku! 7/7
Desikachari Avatar
December 2, 2016 at 1:05 AM
thank you very much Rick
Allison Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 11:30 PM
lovely haiku Vasudevan:-) hugs Jan xx
Desikachari Avatar
December 2, 2016 at 1:05 AM
thank you Jan for the nice comment
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