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A Cloud Fish Nursery Rhyme

I saw a fish swimming in a blue sky A cloud in the shape of a fish, Oh my! Flapping his fins he learnt to fly He circled as I watched him go by He looked down at me with a half closed eye He blew bubbles and made a wish And jumped into a cloudy dish I looked up for the little lost fish, sigh He had vanished within a twinkling of an eye He had no manners, he didn’t say goodbye! 19.4.2021

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Kim Merryman

Date: 4/24/2021 8:23:00 AM

A delightful write, Carol! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/23/2021 12:49:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. What a fun/cute write. Making shapes out of clouds is fun at any age. Have a blessed day/weekend.......................

Carol Mitra
Date: 4/24/2021 1:38:00 AM

Thank you Paula....yes I still make shapes out of clouds....much love...do take care :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/20/2021 6:29:00 PM

Aren’t these nursery rhymes fun to write. Yours is real cute with the little fish who magically disappears Carol. My granddaughter and I enjoy cloud watching and seeing animals in the sky. I am sure this will do well in the contest. Blessings xxoo

Carol Mitra
Date: 4/20/2021 6:42:00 PM

Thank you dear Connie....yes I would cloud watch with my mum and did it with my kids too....nice to know there are others like me in this world.....much love, do take care :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/18/2021 10:38:00 PM

Lovely rhyme Carol.

Carol Mitra
Date: 4/19/2021 1:58:00 AM

Thank you Victor, much love, do take care :)