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Rags and cloth alike Cover thy skin Bare skin, bare emotions Essence of strength Thick and thin circumstances Never inquires, Never contemplates; Society abandons, morals unjust. Abundance of courage, of faith Seething through pores, writhing through veins Heart like gold, his aurora shines Colors of livelihood filter, intertwine Light shimmers in Dark layers out The horizon is beautiful.

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Date: 3/6/2013 11:13:00 AM
Congrats on the win.
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Date: 3/5/2013 11:06:00 PM
Felicitari. Dinamic, alert, modern...
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Date: 3/5/2013 9:33:00 PM
Shannon, a nice and wonderful winning poem...LINDA
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Date: 3/5/2013 4:36:00 PM
Congrats, Shannon. Well done. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 3/5/2013 6:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win my dear Shannon! Thanks for sharing also for this great write of yours! love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 3/5/2013 1:18:00 AM
Congrats on your win Shannon xx
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Date: 2/1/2013 8:21:00 AM
Beautiful beautiful and beautiful...I love this poem you wrote here. I read it three times...Welcome to Poetry Soup..regards INK-U-SCRIPT :)
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Shannon Finch
Date: 2/1/2013 8:06:00 PM
Thank you very much!

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