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A Clear Mind

I'm just listening The composition of beaded notes dive at an angle aimed at my calves Clear projectiles implode on my skin slinking down toward my ankles The rhythm is constant Solid patterns drumming playing trickling A humming opus composed by the grey leaving translucent tones around my feet I could listen forever The drenching sound makes me forget..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/14/2012 8:36:00 AM
aww cool write, welcome to poetry soup
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Date: 6/10/2012 4:36:00 PM
Enjoyed this piece Violet.. Well done!
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Date: 6/8/2012 5:27:00 PM
Interesting Free Verse..Enjoyed reading this eve...Welcome to soup..May your stay be long with many more great post like this..Sara
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Date: 6/6/2012 6:26:00 PM
Violet, very deep,..... excellent poem, thank you for sharing~ Always PD
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Date: 6/6/2012 8:14:00 AM
A well done poem Violet, thank you for visit mine poem today - Happy to see you, welcome back. - Have a lovely day. - oxox love from Anne-Lise
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