A Clear Mind

I'm just listening        
  
The composition of beaded notes          
dive at an angle aimed at my calves        
  
Clear projectiles implode on my skin          
slinking down toward my ankles        
          
The rhythm is constant          
          
          
Solid patterns          
          
drumming          
          
playing          
          
trickling          
          
          
A humming opus composed by the grey          
leaving translucent tones around my feet    
         
I could listen forever      
         
         
The drenching sound      
makes me       
forget..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Christian Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 8:36 AM
aww cool write, welcome to poetry soup
Jones Avatar
June 10, 2012 at 4:36 PM
Enjoyed this piece Violet.. Well done!
Kendrick Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 5:27 PM
Interesting Free Verse..Enjoyed reading this eve...Welcome to soup..May your stay be long with many more great post like this..Sara
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June 6, 2012 at 6:26 PM
Violet, very deep,..... excellent poem, thank you for sharing~ Always PD
Andresen Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 8:14 AM
A well done poem Violet, thank you for visit mine poem today - Happy to see you, welcome back. - Have a lovely day. - oxox love from Anne-Lise
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