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A Clear Blue Day

A clear blue day in the mountains to see The sun shines through the cold air, all around Hills of white snow blown up against each tree The air is refreshing, the sun cheery Each distant mountain top is wearing a crown A clear blue day in the mountains to see A shear of white clouds move on by quietly It’s like the trailing of a satin gown Hills of white snow blown up against each tree With the skies wide open, it feels so free It is all peaceful in this country town A clear blue day in the mountains to see It would be nice to have you here with me Viewing the sights of this snow covered ground Hills of white snow blown up against each tree The beauty of winter can bring such glee The calmness of nature without a sound A clear blue day in the mountains to see Hills of white snow blown up against each tree Heidi Sands 2/1/19

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Date: 2/4/2019 10:30:00 AM
Hi Heidi, this is such a wonderful group of images that your Villanelle does create for us. I love the snow and I love the content of this wonderful write. The beauty of nature springs forth from your golden pen. You paint a beautiful, living canvas that the reader can step into. A fave. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/4/2019 11:18:00 AM
That is great to hear Mike. I appreciate your kind comments on my poems. I am happy you like this one :) Have a nice Monday!
Date: 2/3/2019 7:34:00 AM
Definitely a healing view....
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/3/2019 7:46:00 AM
Nice to hear Arturo. Thank you :)
Date: 2/2/2019 11:00:00 PM
You have made me wish for a wintery scene, which I did not think would ever happen again after last week. I guess you are preparing me for Thursday, for although it is 52 degrees here today, snow is coming back on Thursday. Poetically beautiful and thank you for the mind change.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/3/2019 4:52:00 AM
Thank you Caren. Yes, we will have a few warmer days finally soon. I appreciate your kind comment and you are welcome :)
Date: 2/2/2019 8:05:00 PM
Beautiful Heidi! I can see it all. And feel the fresh and clean, crisp air. Mountain beauty all around.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/3/2019 4:51:00 AM
Thank you Sandy. Much beauty and fresh air :)
Date: 2/2/2019 2:43:00 PM
What a special place this must be, like your poem which is so special too Heidi. I love that the mountain tops all have crowns on and the clouds are like the trailing of a satin gown, such beautiful imagery! Thank you Heidi, with kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/2/2019 3:36:00 PM
Thank you Ann, it is really beautiful. I appreciate your kind feedback on this poem :)
Date: 2/2/2019 12:30:00 PM
Heidi...You took a clear blue day and dressed it to the nines! I rate it a !0!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/2/2019 3:36:00 PM
Thank you so much! I appreciate your visit and kind comment :)
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 2/2/2019 12:31:00 PM
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Date: 2/1/2019 2:03:00 PM
- You describe a beautiful nature on a wonderful winter day, Heidi - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/1/2019 2:13:00 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise. I appreciate your kind feedback!:)
Date: 2/1/2019 1:57:00 PM
WOW! A delightful poem you wrote..a scenic beauty..charming rhythm..excellent creation! I enjoyed the read, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/1/2019 2:13:00 PM
Thank you so much Vijay! I am happy that you enjoyed it. I appreciate the kind feedback too. :)
Date: 2/1/2019 12:37:00 PM
Your beautiful write makes me long to see snow-covered mountains, Heidi. What a beautiful Villanelle you created. I'm not sure where you live, but reading this I envision New Hampshire's White Mountains. I recall you writing about mountains previously, so I'm envious. What a special place you have! Hugs, Carolyn
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/1/2019 12:52:00 PM
Thank you so much Carolyn. It is so beautiful and you are right, about the NH White Mountains. I am very grateful , yes. :)

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