A Clear Blue Day

A clear blue day in the mountains to see
The sun shines through the cold air, all around
Hills of white snow blown up against each tree

The air is refreshing, the sun cheery
Each distant mountain top is wearing a crown
A clear blue day in the mountains to see

A shear of white clouds move on by quietly
It’s like the trailing of a satin gown
Hills of white snow blown up against each tree

With the skies wide open, it feels so free
It is all peaceful in this country town
A clear blue day in the mountains to see

It would be nice to have you here with me
Viewing the sights of this snow covered ground
Hills of white snow blown up against each tree

The beauty of winter can bring such glee
The calmness of nature without a sound
A clear blue day in the mountains to see
Hills of white snow blown up against each tree

Heidi Sands  

2/1/19
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Raven Avatar
February 4, 2019 at 10:30 AM
Hi Heidi, this is such a wonderful group of images that your Villanelle does create for us. I love the snow and I love the content of this wonderful write. The beauty of nature springs forth from your golden pen. You paint a beautiful, living canvas that the reader can step into. A fave. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Sands Avatar
February 4, 2019 at 11:18 AM
That is great to hear Mike. I appreciate your kind comments on my poems. I am happy you like this one :) Have a nice Monday!
Michael Avatar
February 3, 2019 at 7:34 AM
Definitely a healing view....
Sands Avatar
February 3, 2019 at 7:46 AM
Nice to hear Arturo. Thank you :)
Krutsinger Avatar
February 2, 2019 at 11:00 PM
You have made me wish for a wintery scene, which I did not think would ever happen again after last week. I guess you are preparing me for Thursday, for although it is 52 degrees here today, snow is coming back on Thursday. Poetically beautiful and thank you for the mind change.
Sands Avatar
February 3, 2019 at 4:52 AM
Thank you Caren. Yes, we will have a few warmer days finally soon. I appreciate your kind comment and you are welcome :)
Gilmour Avatar
February 2, 2019 at 2:43 PM
What a special place this must be, like your poem which is so special too Heidi. I love that the mountain tops all have crowns on and the clouds are like the trailing of a satin gown, such beautiful imagery! Thank you Heidi, with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Sands Avatar
February 2, 2019 at 3:36 PM
Thank you Ann, it is really beautiful. I appreciate your kind feedback on this poem :)
Melugin Avatar
February 2, 2019 at 12:30 PM
Heidi...You took a clear blue day and dressed it to the nines! I rate it a !0!
Sands Avatar
February 2, 2019 at 3:36 PM
Thank you so much! I appreciate your visit and kind comment :)
Melugin Avatar
February 2, 2019 at 12:31 PM
A Ten
Andresen Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 2:03 PM
- You describe a beautiful nature on a wonderful winter day, Heidi - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 2:13 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise. I appreciate your kind feedback!:)
Pandit Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 1:57 PM
WOW! A delightful poem you wrote..a scenic beauty..charming rhythm..excellent creation! I enjoyed the read, Heidi.
Sands Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 2:13 PM
Thank you so much Vijay! I am happy that you enjoyed it. I appreciate the kind feedback too. :)
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February 1, 2019 at 12:37 PM
Your beautiful write makes me long to see snow-covered mountains, Heidi. What a beautiful Villanelle you created. I'm not sure where you live, but reading this I envision New Hampshire's White Mountains. I recall you writing about mountains previously, so I'm envious. What a special place you have! Hugs, Carolyn
Sands Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 12:52 PM
Thank you so much Carolyn. It is so beautiful and you are right, about the NH White Mountains. I am very grateful , yes. :)
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