Lee Ramage Poet Rhyme

A City's Personality

A personality,
Ends in fatality,
Witness a city alive,
Pastry smells fill the air,
Architecture you stare,
Business, people make it thrive,
Each city has its feel,
Recession ends the steel,
Can it possibly revive?


Written by Lee Ramage
September 30, 2011
For Dr. Ram Mehta’s contest
Balassi Stanza
won 6th Place

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Anne P. Murray July 27, 2012 at 6:07 PM very creative work. I don't know scoot about all the different forms of poetry. I just write what I feel. I guess I should learn about them all XXOO anne Lee Ramage July 27, 2012 at 6:09 PM Thanks Anne, I don't know either, but you just try! Lee

Carol Sunshine Brown October 24, 2011 at 8:03 AM Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's "Balassi Stanza" contest Lee. Love, Carol

Nancy Jones October 23, 2011 at 4:31 PM Way to write a Balassi, Lee! Well done and timely to boot. Congrats, happy day, namaste~N

Sara Kendrick October 23, 2011 at 11:08 AM Some won't make it..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Congrats on your win..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 23, 2011 at 8:41 AM Congrats Lee on an amazing win with this exciting entry of poetic art luv.. always super to read your words so expressive...

John Freeman October 23, 2011 at 5:18 AM Awesome verse Lee. Congratulations on your win. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta October 23, 2011 at 3:44 AM Congratulations on the win in my contest, Lee

Nette Onclaud October 1, 2011 at 12:35 PM greeat work and great eye for life;s wonders, lee.. lots of luck! :) huggs, nette

Fabiyas M V October 1, 2011 at 6:38 AM Great theme packed in nice style,Lee.I liked it.A great entry for the contest.Thank you for your nice comments on my verse.Have a nice day!

Carolyn Devonshire October 1, 2011 at 2:36 AM I sure hope prosperous times can be revived, Lee. This is an awesome Balassi. Dr. Ram is sure to love it. Best wishes in his contest! Love, Carolyn