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A Circus Clown

A Circus Clown Story/poem Once there was a circus clown. He lived to make the people happy. Everyday he would dress up, paint his face to be ready for his show. This clown was not like other clowns. He was very special. Every time he put on a show - he had a little toy clown with him. While he put on the show - he made everybody laugh, but once in a while he would see someone sad. Later he would go and talk to the person. He would offer to help them and give them the toy clown, but when they met their goals, they would always leave the little toy clown behind. He would pick it up again and that made him very sad. One day he saw a young man that was very sad, he went and asked him what was wrong.? The young man told him - I can'y succeed in life. The clown told him I will help you. Take this little clown and keep him, your life will change. Soon one day he saw the young man again. He told him - I can't believe it, I am now very successful just as you said . He walked away without a thank you, leaving the little clown behind. The clown very sad picked it up and went home. Another day he was putting on a show, when he saw a young girl very sad and crying. He went to her and asked what was wrong, why was she crying like that? She said - I always wanted to be an actress and be famous, but they never pick me. The clown told her - don't cry no more take this little clown and keep him. I am going to help you. In a couple of months, people started to know about her. She became quiet famous. One day she was nominated for an award. The day of the event a lot of famous people went and also crowds from the public. The circus clown was there too. As she got her award - everybody applauded, so did the clown. She was very happy and came down and thank the people, but she passed up the clown. When everyone was gone, he saw the little toy clown on the floor. With tears in his eyes he picked it up. He started walking and felt his chest burst open. His heart poped out - He than saw it fall to the floor and break into many pieces. With tears still rolling down his face, he knelt down, picked up the pieces, put them together and put it back in his chest and walked away to find other people to help... 02/10/2014 Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo Note: The moral of this story is that he had a big heart. Even though his heart was broken he still wanted to help people..... Do you have a big heart?

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Date: 2/25/2014 4:35:00 PM
Nice parable here! I am a circus lover and have seen the B & B circus and the Cole Brothers Circus. The B & B circus is in Brooklyn and I may go wee it! I knew someone who was a circus clown. Not an easy job. Well, I hope you keep writing and thank you for your kind words! Matthew Ansih
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Date: 2/16/2014 9:39:00 PM
From a Payaso, Beautiful !!!
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 2/17/2014 4:33:00 PM
From one to another - thank you. You will see why later/ maybe you should check out my poem ( Clown )
Date: 2/15/2014 9:58:00 AM
Hi Lucilla: Great Write! I can really relate. The clown deeply wanted to help people with his metaphoric gift but received no recognition. He was one of many unsung heroes .Please read my Ode to an unsung hero
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 2/17/2014 4:35:00 PM
Thank you Ralph - i've been there before. It hurts when the ones you help don't even care.
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 2/15/2014 10:32:00 AM
Thank you Ralph for your nice comment. and I will read your poem...... Lucilla
Date: 2/12/2014 12:18:00 PM
your love shows who you truly are... such a deep, heartfelt piece that generously displays the gift of generosity, lucy... this is totally uplifting!.. huggs
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 2/15/2014 10:34:00 AM
Thank you nette for your nice comment to my poem. Manny blessings always.... Lucilla
Date: 2/11/2014 12:51:00 AM
Whoa Lucilla! This is an excellent write - great message. The circus clown shows us the true meaning of helping people unconditionally, without expecting anything in return. His never-give-up-on-your-quest attitude is a good lesson to keep close to the heart. Very well penned.
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 2/11/2014 8:50:00 AM
Thanks for liking my poem Vicky. We should never expect nothing in return when we help some one. Helping some one should come from the heart. I will visit your page later... Lucilla
Date: 2/10/2014 10:35:00 PM
The company I keep, plus the choices I make, define my heart. This was deeply powerful & heart-wrenching. Fantastic job!
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 2/11/2014 8:46:00 AM
You are so right. There is a saying - tell me who your friends are I will tell you , who you are. The more good we do in life - the more blessings we will get.. Thanks for liking my poem.... Lucilla
Date: 2/10/2014 10:01:00 PM
This is a tremendous write here my friend! I love the moral of the story, a very awesome poem! I really enjoyed reading this glorious piece this evening! Great Work!!
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 2/11/2014 8:41:00 AM
Hi Russell; Thank you so much for liking my poem and for the nice comment..... Lucilla
Date: 2/10/2014 8:54:00 PM
Yes lucilla....we get our blessing from the giving...what others do with the gift is theirs to answer for...a great message..
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 2/11/2014 8:39:00 AM
Yes Donna - you are right. thanks for the visit..... Lucilla
Date: 2/10/2014 5:36:00 PM
I loved the story . The answer to your question is for others to judge but I do hope so. Daz
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 2/11/2014 8:37:00 AM
Thank you and I do believe that you do have a big heart. ...Lucilla
Date: 2/10/2014 4:28:00 PM
Interesting poem Lucy, i like the moral of the story. SKAT
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 2/10/2014 4:51:00 PM
Thank you Skat. I'm glad that you enjoyed it....Lucy
Date: 2/10/2014 3:01:00 PM
- I know I've told you before Lucilla my friend - but, you are really skilled with these little stories - all have some moral in theme. - Really nice to read this even if it was also a little sad. - Have a nice week - take care of yourself. - My heart is big enough for all - who wants a place :) <3 <3 <3 - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 2/10/2014 4:49:00 PM
Thank you so much for liking my story/poem. I was not too sure if I should post it. There are so many stories in the world. This was one of them. .. Lucilla

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