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A Christmas Story - Leg Display

a sexy leg lamp
perched in the window lit up
his eyes, her anger



12/29/11

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Poet Destroyer A

March 2, 2012 at 9:49 PM

SUSAN..READING UP ON SOME OLD CONTEST* CONGRATULATIONS~ WITH YOUR AWESOME WIN! ;-)*always..pd

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 9, 2012 at 7:24 AM

Congratulations on your win in Andrea's "Movie Senryu" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Audrey Haick

January 7, 2012 at 2:34 PM

Congratulations on your fine win, Susan! Love, Annalise

Sara Kendrick

January 7, 2012 at 1:49 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

January 7, 2012 at 12:33 PM

Congrats on your win, Susan! I am out of the loop, haha I never saw this movie but this still stood out for me! Very interesting scene! Your last line here gave it such a twist for me... :)

Gwendolen Song

January 7, 2012 at 3:13 AM

A great scene to write about! Sounds like by your movie library that you are one down to earth gal, Susan. Enjoyed...congrats! Gwendolen

Carrie Richards

December 30, 2011 at 5:25 PM

Oh, we love this movie at our house..(just watched it once again a couple of days ago)..... omg that leg lamp...!!! Who could forget it??? Good luck in the contest!

Robert Pettit

December 29, 2011 at 11:57 PM

A woman is jealous of a sexy lamp? That's carrying it a bit too far. The lamp is not the real thing. Has she ever been jealous of department store mannequins? Good write. I have also sent you soup mail.

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