A Christmas Snow

It snowed all night!
On Christmas Day,
the ground was white, 
so we could play.
Then men of snow
stood in a row.

For Gail’s A Christmas Snow contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Johnson Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 11:21 AM
When we get older we tend to not look forward to winter. Thank you for reminding me of how much I loved it as a child. Peace and Merry Christmas. :)
Kendrick Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 2:37 PM
I see that you probably didn't make it as well as I didn't make it..Well better winnings next time..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara
Babcock Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 12:16 PM
Lovely scene you have created. Our snow has mostly melted due to warm air. It was nice to get out and do the shopping. It is like a hint of spring at the moment but we still have those cold months ahead. Lovely poem. love phyl
La France Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 7:30 AM
Jack, this is lovely, best of luck in the contest ~~
Dietrich Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 12:15 AM
Jack, you are a MASTER at taking a theme and making it so short!! and you rhymed like she likes too. So cute.
Onclaud Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 11:11 PM
Lovely visual in just a few words, jack... happy holydays!.. huggs
Johnson Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 10:51 PM
Tis the season for white magic. It fills the soul with joy. Children with their cheeks so rosy. Every girl and boy. Wishing you a wonder holiday season Jack. Peace. :)
Callus Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 4:03 PM
Snow on Christmas day is said to make it a perfect day! This lovely poem would! [I have never seen snow on Christmas day; over here it never snows.] // paul
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