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A Christmas Serene

a christmas serene 

            spruce trees yuletide scene
       point skyward don snow clad preen
                   stars halo pristine 


Fall or Winter Holiday Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin
Syllable counter ps 5/7/5
11/18/21

Copyright © David Kavanagh | Year Posted 2021

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Eve Roper Date: 11/29/2021 6:42:00 PM David, well written. Congratulations on your win in Tania's contest. Eve Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 11/30/2021 12:32:00 AM Thank you Eve, this was one I really enjoyed writing, and I’m delighted with the placement, cheers David

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/29/2021 3:19:00 AM I have read your winning work and was delighted that it was in the winners' list. Congrats. Sara Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 11/29/2021 6:28:00 AM Your very kind Sara, slightly unorthodox haiku, but I liked the rhyme, thank you for stopping by, cheers David

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/28/2021 7:01:00 PM pretty one with great rhyme. Congrats Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 11/28/2021 8:08:00 PM Heya Andrea, I felt compelled to try the Rhyme, it seemed to work relatively well, makes for a nice picture, cheers David

Kim Rodrigues Date: 11/27/2021 9:28:00 AM Lovely opener! Congratulations, David! Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 11/27/2021 11:51:00 AM Thank you Kim, I couldn’t resist the rhyme, probably to this forms detriment, but hey I’m happy with it, cheers David

Jan Allison Date: 11/26/2021 5:09:00 PM what wonderful imagery David, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 11/27/2021 11:49:00 AM Heya Jan, I’m really happy with this one, even lifted my own spirits lol, cheers David

Tania Kitchin Date: 11/26/2021 12:25:00 PM David, wonderful imagery, congratulations on your winning placement! Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 11/26/2021 1:01:00 PM Thank you Tania, I enjoyed writing this one for your contest, cheers David

Paulette Calasibetta Date: 11/22/2021 12:44:00 PM Love this....the imagery of words didn't even need a pic. Blessings, Paulette Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 11/22/2021 12:59:00 PM Heya Paulette, thank you for stopping by, I really enjoyed writing this one, I don’t normally use pictures, but kind of got caught up in the moment, cheers David

Alexis Y. Date: 11/20/2021 7:48:00 AM WoW! David, There is much imagery and content in a few words. Nice photo as well. Best wishes in the content. Have a great day:-)Alexis Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 11/20/2021 8:38:00 AM Thank you Anne Lise, the picture says it all, I was just trying to do it justice, in brevity of words, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty Date: 11/18/2021 2:30:00 PM Beautiful Star halo pristine Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 11/18/2021 2:40:00 PM Hell yeah! Halos are always supposed to be pristine

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 11/18/2021 12:42:00 PM Hello David Walker, when the snow falls coating the trees , they are decorated for Christmas. Enjoy your day my friend. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 11/19/2021 5:49:00 AM Hello David Walker, the trees look so beautiful with the snow covered on the trees. Even better on the Spruce and Evergreen trees. Cheers! Darlene. David Kavanagh Date: 11/18/2021 12:47:00 PM Thank you Darlene Yes indeed the snow on the trees and night sky are really all the decorations we need, cheers David

Harry Horsman Date: 11/17/2021 6:14:00 PM The perfect scene, the perfect poem. Love this. Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 11/18/2021 1:04:00 AM Thank you Harry, for the perfect comment, nobody does Christmas like raw nature, cheers David

Sotto Poet Date: 11/17/2021 4:40:00 PM You've captured the essence of winter perfectly. David, I can't realize how fast we are to the end of the year. Several of the homes in my neighborhood have their Christmas lights up early. Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 11/18/2021 1:10:00 AM Thank you Lasaad, I was just saying that to Tom, seems very strange to start lighting up for Christmas so early, nature seemed to time it just right in the past, now it's hit and miss with global warming, cheers David

Tom Cunningham Date: 11/17/2021 3:03:00 PM You created a perfect winter image David, can't believe it's nearly on us. Tom Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 11/17/2021 3:09:00 PM Thank you Tom, some houses near me have the decorations up already, Will hang on til December before we start putting ours up, cheers David