David Kavanagh Poet Haiku

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A Christmas Serene

a christmas serene 

            spruce trees yuletide scene
       point skyward don snow clad preen
                   stars halo pristine 


Fall or Winter Holiday Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin
Syllable counter ps 5/7/5
11/18/21

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Eve Roper November 29, 2021 at 6:42 PM David, well written. Congratulations on your win in Tania's contest. Eve David Kavanagh November 30, 2021 at 12:32 AM Thank you Eve, this was one I really enjoyed writing, and I’m delighted with the placement, cheers David

Sara Kendrick November 29, 2021 at 3:19 AM I have read your winning work and was delighted that it was in the winners' list. Congrats. Sara David Kavanagh November 29, 2021 at 6:28 AM Your very kind Sara, slightly unorthodox haiku, but I liked the rhyme, thank you for stopping by, cheers David

Andrea Dietrich November 28, 2021 at 7:01 PM pretty one with great rhyme. Congrats David Kavanagh November 28, 2021 at 8:08 PM Heya Andrea, I felt compelled to try the Rhyme, it seemed to work relatively well, makes for a nice picture, cheers David

Kim Rodrigues November 27, 2021 at 9:28 AM Lovely opener! Congratulations, David! David Kavanagh November 27, 2021 at 11:51 AM Thank you Kim, I couldn’t resist the rhyme, probably to this forms detriment, but hey I’m happy with it, cheers David

Jan Allison November 26, 2021 at 5:09 PM what wonderful imagery David, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx David Kavanagh November 27, 2021 at 11:49 AM Heya Jan, I’m really happy with this one, even lifted my own spirits lol, cheers David

Tania Kitchin November 26, 2021 at 12:25 PM David, wonderful imagery, congratulations on your winning placement! David Kavanagh November 26, 2021 at 1:01 PM Thank you Tania, I enjoyed writing this one for your contest, cheers David

Paulette Calasibetta November 22, 2021 at 12:44 PM Love this....the imagery of words didn't even need a pic. Blessings, Paulette David Kavanagh November 22, 2021 at 12:59 PM Heya Paulette, thank you for stopping by, I really enjoyed writing this one, I don’t normally use pictures, but kind of got caught up in the moment, cheers David

Alexis Y. November 20, 2021 at 7:48 AM WoW! David, There is much imagery and content in a few words. Nice photo as well. Best wishes in the content. Have a great day:-)Alexis David Kavanagh November 20, 2021 at 8:38 AM Thank you Anne Lise, the picture says it all, I was just trying to do it justice, in brevity of words, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty November 18, 2021 at 2:30 PM Beautiful Star halo pristine David Kavanagh November 18, 2021 at 2:40 PM Hell yeah! Halos are always supposed to be pristine

Darlene De Beaulieu November 18, 2021 at 12:42 PM Hello David Walker, when the snow falls coating the trees , they are decorated for Christmas. Enjoy your day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu November 19, 2021 at 5:49 AM Hello David Walker, the trees look so beautiful with the snow covered on the trees. Even better on the Spruce and Evergreen trees. Cheers! Darlene. David Kavanagh November 18, 2021 at 12:47 PM Thank you Darlene Yes indeed the snow on the trees and night sky are really all the decorations we need, cheers David

Harry Horsman November 17, 2021 at 6:14 PM The perfect scene, the perfect poem. Love this. David Kavanagh November 18, 2021 at 1:04 AM Thank you Harry, for the perfect comment, nobody does Christmas like raw nature, cheers David

Sotto Poet November 17, 2021 at 4:40 PM You've captured the essence of winter perfectly. David, I can't realize how fast we are to the end of the year. Several of the homes in my neighborhood have their Christmas lights up early. David Kavanagh November 18, 2021 at 1:10 AM Thank you Lasaad, I was just saying that to Tom, seems very strange to start lighting up for Christmas so early, nature seemed to time it just right in the past, now it's hit and miss with global warming, cheers David

Tom Cunningham November 17, 2021 at 3:03 PM You created a perfect winter image David, can't believe it's nearly on us. Tom David Kavanagh November 17, 2021 at 3:09 PM Thank you Tom, some houses near me have the decorations up already, Will hang on til December before we start putting ours up, cheers David