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A Christmas Serene

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a christmas serene spruce trees yuletide scene point skyward don snow clad preen stars halo pristine Fall or Winter Holiday Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin Syllable counter ps 5/7/5 11/18/21

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Eve Roper

Date: 11/29/2021 6:42:00 PM

David, well written. Congratulations on your win in Tania's contest. Eve

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/30/2021 12:32:00 AM

Thank you Eve, this was one I really enjoyed writing, and I’m delighted with the placement, cheers David

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/29/2021 3:19:00 AM

I have read your winning work and was delighted that it was in the winners' list. Congrats. Sara

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/29/2021 6:28:00 AM

Your very kind Sara, slightly unorthodox haiku, but I liked the rhyme, thank you for stopping by, cheers David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/28/2021 7:01:00 PM

pretty one with great rhyme. Congrats

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/28/2021 8:08:00 PM

Heya Andrea, I felt compelled to try the Rhyme, it seemed to work relatively well, makes for a nice picture, cheers David

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/27/2021 9:28:00 AM

Lovely opener! Congratulations, David!

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/27/2021 11:51:00 AM

Thank you Kim, I couldn’t resist the rhyme, probably to this forms detriment, but hey I’m happy with it, cheers David

Jan Allison

Date: 11/26/2021 5:09:00 PM

what wonderful imagery David, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/27/2021 11:49:00 AM

Heya Jan, I’m really happy with this one, even lifted my own spirits lol, cheers David

Tania Kitchin

Date: 11/26/2021 12:25:00 PM

David, wonderful imagery, congratulations on your winning placement!

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/26/2021 1:01:00 PM

Thank you Tania, I enjoyed writing this one for your contest, cheers David

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 11/22/2021 12:44:00 PM

Love this....the imagery of words didn't even need a pic. Blessings, Paulette

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/22/2021 12:59:00 PM

Heya Paulette, thank you for stopping by, I really enjoyed writing this one, I don’t normally use pictures, but kind of got caught up in the moment, cheers David

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/20/2021 7:48:00 AM

WoW! David, There is much imagery and content in a few words. Nice photo as well. Best wishes in the content. Have a great day:-)Alexis

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/20/2021 8:38:00 AM

Thank you Anne Lise, the picture says it all, I was just trying to do it justice, in brevity of words, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 11/18/2021 2:30:00 PM

Beautiful Star halo pristine

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/18/2021 2:40:00 PM

Hell yeah! Halos are always supposed to be pristine

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/18/2021 12:42:00 PM

Hello David Walker, when the snow falls coating the trees , they are decorated for Christmas. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/19/2021 5:49:00 AM

Hello David Walker, the trees look so beautiful with the snow covered on the trees. Even better on the Spruce and Evergreen trees. Cheers! Darlene.

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/18/2021 12:47:00 PM

Thank you Darlene Yes indeed the snow on the trees and night sky are really all the decorations we need, cheers David

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/17/2021 6:14:00 PM

The perfect scene, the perfect poem. Love this.

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/18/2021 1:04:00 AM

Thank you Harry, for the perfect comment, nobody does Christmas like raw nature, cheers David

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/17/2021 4:40:00 PM

You've captured the essence of winter perfectly. David, I can't realize how fast we are to the end of the year. Several of the homes in my neighborhood have their Christmas lights up early.

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/18/2021 1:10:00 AM

Thank you Lasaad, I was just saying that to Tom, seems very strange to start lighting up for Christmas so early, nature seemed to time it just right in the past, now it's hit and miss with global warming, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/17/2021 3:03:00 PM

You created a perfect winter image David, can't believe it's nearly on us. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/17/2021 3:09:00 PM

Thank you Tom, some houses near me have the decorations up already, Will hang on til December before we start putting ours up, cheers David