Kash Poet Poet Pantoum

A Christmas Miracle To Fulfill This Wish

I have that wish in my heart
many of you must have the same,
a disease free healthy world
forget all those cursed names.

Many of you must have the same
a dream of disease free world,
forget all those cursed names
let that joyful world unfurled.

A dream of disease free world
where people love to live,
let that joyful world unfurled
where everyone is ever active.

Where people love to live
children forget curse of pain,
where everyone is ever active
no disease to drive insane.

Children forget curse of pain
old age ceases to be a problem,
no disease to drive insane
everybody a winner in life's game.

Old age ceases to be a problem
a disease free healthy world,
everybody a winner in life's game
I have that wish in my heart.




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Placement: 3rd; (December 2011)

Contest:Your Christmas Miracle

Sponsor:Carolyn Devonshire

By :kashinath karmakar

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Debbie Guzzi December 23, 2011 at 2:53 PM Of course YOU would wish this..a man of love and peace...Congrad's Light & Love

John Freeman December 14, 2011 at 10:22 AM I believe your have the scoop Kash" cursed " by what one believes. Congrats on your worthy win. Agape, Moses

Audrey Haick December 13, 2011 at 5:32 PM Congratulations on a well deserved win, Kash! What a miracle that would be! Blessings for this holy season. Love, Annalise

Carol Sunshine Brown December 13, 2011 at 10:37 AM Congratulations on your super placement in the "Your Christmas Miracle" contest Kash. Love and blessings always, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 13, 2011 at 10:31 AM Congratulations Kash, Love it x

Carolyn Devonshire December 13, 2011 at 10:12 AM Kash, you and Jack seek the same Christmas miracle. How wonderful it would be if this came true. Beautifully written and very touching. Congratulations on your win! Love and Christmas blessings, Carolyn

Gwendolen Song December 13, 2011 at 8:28 AM This is a fabulous idea for the world, Kash...then pharmaceutical companies would not be able to screw us soooo much. A great form for this topic..love the pantoum form so much will allows you to over emphasize this NEED. Best of luck in this contest. You have such a wonderful wishful heart! Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich December 8, 2011 at 11:44 PM Kash, this is very much what I would have wished too. If I ever get around to trying this contest! In fact, I had considered writing about my desire for good health care for all and I had thought kyrielle or pantoum would be the best forms for expressing it. You chose a great form for this! I think it is a winner. I am so tired from all the judging, etc. I'll save your other poem for one to see tomorrow.Luv, Andrea

M.I.A . December 7, 2011 at 8:30 PM your wish is in my prayers Kash. a wonderful poem with intriguing style you got here.

Harry Horsman December 7, 2011 at 10:41 AM brilliant form of poetry Kash, enhanced by your awesome written words, really like this. harry

Tony Lane December 6, 2011 at 12:57 PM Now if I could just get rid of this cold. Warm wishes to you.

Dan Kearley December 6, 2011 at 12:12 PM You seem to have love in your heart..Thinking of others with a wish.Very nice!

Sara Kendrick December 6, 2011 at 11:17 AM Yes, that would be a great world to live in..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K. December 6, 2011 at 11:15 AM What a very beautiful wish, Kash... also reflects a beautiful soul I think ;)...btw, a missing "L" in fulfill... and ok I really have to ask-- what photo are you talking about? See, the baby girl grew up already :D....

Sarah Seraphin December 6, 2011 at 10:15 AM * "VERY BEAUTIFUL LOVING POETIC WISH * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL KASH * ONE DAY IT SHALL SURELY BE * JOY THROUGHT THE ENTIRE UNIVERSE * DISEASE HOLDS SO MANY FORMS * LET THEM MELT AWAY * SOOOTHING OINMENTS UNTO A BRIGHTER WAY * QUITE LOVELY * MY LUV, FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *