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A Christmas Miracle To Fulfill This Wish

I have that wish in my heart many of you must have the same, a disease free healthy world forget all those cursed names. Many of you must have the same a dream of disease free world, forget all those cursed names let that joyful world unfurled. A dream of disease free world where people love to live, let that joyful world unfurled where everyone is ever active. Where people love to live children forget curse of pain, where everyone is ever active no disease to drive insane. Children forget curse of pain old age ceases to be a problem, no disease to drive insane everybody a winner in life's game. Old age ceases to be a problem a disease free healthy world, everybody a winner in life's game I have that wish in my heart. ============================ Placement: 3rd; (December 2011) Contest:Your Christmas Miracle Sponsor:Carolyn Devonshire By :kashinath karmakar

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Date: 12/23/2011 2:53:00 PM
Of course YOU would wish this..a man of love and peace...Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 12/14/2011 10:22:00 AM
I believe your have the scoop Kash" cursed " by what one believes. Congrats on your worthy win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/13/2011 5:32:00 PM
Congratulations on a well deserved win, Kash! What a miracle that would be! Blessings for this holy season. Love, Annalise
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Date: 12/13/2011 10:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in the "Your Christmas Miracle" contest Kash. Love and blessings always, Carol
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Date: 12/13/2011 10:31:00 AM
Congratulations Kash, Love it x
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Date: 12/13/2011 10:12:00 AM
Kash, you and Jack seek the same Christmas miracle. How wonderful it would be if this came true. Beautifully written and very touching. Congratulations on your win! Love and Christmas blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 12/13/2011 8:28:00 AM
This is a fabulous idea for the world, Kash...then pharmaceutical companies would not be able to screw us soooo much. A great form for this topic..love the pantoum form so much will allows you to over emphasize this NEED. Best of luck in this contest. You have such a wonderful wishful heart! Gwendolen
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Date: 12/8/2011 11:44:00 PM
Kash, this is very much what I would have wished too. If I ever get around to trying this contest! In fact, I had considered writing about my desire for good health care for all and I had thought kyrielle or pantoum would be the best forms for expressing it. You chose a great form for this! I think it is a winner. I am so tired from all the judging, etc. I'll save your other poem for one to see tomorrow.Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/7/2011 8:30:00 PM
your wish is in my prayers Kash. a wonderful poem with intriguing style you got here.
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Date: 12/7/2011 10:41:00 AM
brilliant form of poetry Kash, enhanced by your awesome written words, really like this. harry
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Date: 12/6/2011 12:57:00 PM
Now if I could just get rid of this cold. Warm wishes to you.
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Date: 12/6/2011 12:12:00 PM
You seem to have love in your heart..Thinking of others with a wish.Very nice!
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Date: 12/6/2011 11:17:00 AM
Yes, that would be a great world to live in..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara
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Date: 12/6/2011 11:15:00 AM
What a very beautiful wish, Kash... also reflects a beautiful soul I think ;)...btw, a missing "L" in fulfill... and ok I really have to ask-- what photo are you talking about? See, the baby girl grew up already :D....
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Date: 12/6/2011 10:15:00 AM
* "VERY BEAUTIFUL LOVING POETIC WISH * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL KASH * ONE DAY IT SHALL SURELY BE * JOY THROUGHT THE ENTIRE UNIVERSE * DISEASE HOLDS SO MANY FORMS * LET THEM MELT AWAY * SOOOTHING OINMENTS UNTO A BRIGHTER WAY * QUITE LOVELY * MY LUV, FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *
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