A Christmas Callgirl

Everyone has gone home
Where ever home is
The city is bare
Only me
And the call girl left
We share our secrets
In silence
Comrades in despair
The cold winter chills us all
So we two find comfort
In a passing moment
She kisses her past
I kiss my desires
Our tongues kiss our dreams
A Christmas carol plays in the background
Snow begins to fall
Madeline must now go
On another call
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Chircop Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 8:47 PM
A pity She couldnt stay the night,and another night,and another-to fulfill his lonliness whilst erasing her own.A sad feeling lingers here Arthur.. Everyone needs to be loved.
Vaso Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 9:13 PM
This is so true, and your comments explain what I was trying to convey, even I added a wee twist to it. In either case it was 2 lonely souls who in silence shared at least that bond.
Dunn Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 7:18 PM
Very interesting work here my friend, but at least for that moment these two christmas spirits found comfort in each others arms, nice work Arthur and thanks for your comment on my ice angel write, cheri
Vaso Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 9:39 PM
thank you cherl
Smith Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 10:55 PM
A fabulous story of two lonely souls finding love in the night if only briefly
Vaso Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 9:38 PM
Yes, from the mouth of a true romantic!!!!! Cheers
Dietrich Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 8:52 PM
I enjoyed this one, Arthur. a very interesting one for the season. I like them different like this.
Vaso Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 9:38 PM
If anything I try to be different! :) Hugs
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