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A Christmas Callgirl

Everyone has gone home
Where ever home is
The city is bare
Only me
And the call girl left
We share our secrets
In silence
Comrades in despair
The cold winter chills us all
So we two find comfort
In a passing moment
She kisses her past
I kiss my desires
Our tongues kiss our dreams
A Christmas carol plays in the background
Snow begins to fall
Madeline must now go
On another call

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/17/2014 7:20:00 PM
No one should be alone, this is touching in it's own way.
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arthur vaso
Date: 12/17/2014 10:49:00 PM
Thank you Richard, that was the idea I was trying to convey.
Date: 12/14/2014 8:52:00 PM
Ha.. Kind of surreal until it got creepy ;)
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arthur vaso
Date: 12/14/2014 9:10:00 PM
Well loneliness is universal condition, as is poverty, as is love, there are more messages here than the obvious, thus the chosen name of the woman.
Date: 12/14/2014 8:47:00 PM
A pity She couldnt stay the night,and another night,and another-to fulfill his lonliness whilst erasing her own.A sad feeling lingers here Arthur.. Everyone needs to be loved.
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arthur vaso
Date: 12/14/2014 9:13:00 PM
This is so true, and your comments explain what I was trying to convey, even I added a wee twist to it. In either case it was 2 lonely souls who in silence shared at least that bond.
Date: 12/14/2014 7:18:00 PM
Very interesting work here my friend, but at least for that moment these two christmas spirits found comfort in each others arms, nice work Arthur and thanks for your comment on my ice angel write, cheri
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arthur vaso
Date: 12/14/2014 9:39:00 PM
thank you cherl
Date: 12/13/2014 10:55:00 PM
A fabulous story of two lonely souls finding love in the night if only briefly
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arthur vaso
Date: 12/14/2014 9:38:00 PM
Yes, from the mouth of a true romantic!!!!! Cheers
Date: 12/13/2014 8:52:00 PM
I enjoyed this one, Arthur. a very interesting one for the season. I like them different like this.
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arthur vaso
Date: 12/14/2014 9:38:00 PM
If anything I try to be different! :) Hugs