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A Christmas Callgirl

Everyone has gone home
Where ever home is
The city is bare
Only me
And the call girl left
We share our secrets
In silence
Comrades in despair
The cold winter chills us all
So we two find comfort
In a passing moment
She kisses her past
I kiss my desires
Our tongues kiss our dreams
A Christmas carol plays in the background
Snow begins to fall
Madeline must now go
On another call

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Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/17/2014 7:20:00 PM No one should be alone, this is touching in it's own way. Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 12/17/2014 10:49:00 PM Thank you Richard, that was the idea I was trying to convey.

Charmaine Chircop Date: 12/14/2014 8:47:00 PM A pity She couldnt stay the night,and another night,and another-to fulfill his lonliness whilst erasing her own.A sad feeling lingers here Arthur.. Everyone needs to be loved. Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 12/14/2014 9:13:00 PM This is so true, and your comments explain what I was trying to convey, even I added a wee twist to it. In either case it was 2 lonely souls who in silence shared at least that bond.

Cherl Dunn Date: 12/14/2014 7:18:00 PM Very interesting work here my friend, but at least for that moment these two christmas spirits found comfort in each others arms, nice work Arthur and thanks for your comment on my ice angel write, cheri Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 12/14/2014 9:39:00 PM thank you cherl

Tim Smith Date: 12/13/2014 10:55:00 PM A fabulous story of two lonely souls finding love in the night if only briefly Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 12/14/2014 9:38:00 PM Yes, from the mouth of a true romantic!!!!! Cheers

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/13/2014 8:52:00 PM I enjoyed this one, Arthur. a very interesting one for the season. I like them different like this. Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 12/14/2014 9:38:00 PM If anything I try to be different! :) Hugs