A Choir of One

Sun drips her smile off my cheek
interrupting moments weak
a hummingbird hovers 
outside the pane
of my half-opened window
trying to capture the drops
of sugar falling off my lips
but no one wants to hear a choir of one
even if filled with love

notes sour
in an empty breeze
no apparent harmony

salt seeks her home
recover what's seen
backdrop to discovery

Stolen dreams drift off without me
watched under the heat of day
burnt into oblivion
under two-bit glass
cutting at the heart of tomorrow
I sing a pretty song
as the sun silently disappears
Votre amour est tenu dans ces yeux
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Polydoro Avatar
February 8, 2017 at 6:45 PM
This is such a beautiful poem, Tim... "Stolen dreams drift off without me" loved this line... Hugs
Onclaud Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 10:15 AM
one is a lonely number even if love is around...then again, feeling bliss on your own can be fulfilling... wonderfully penned, tim..huggs
Teagan Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 8:35 AM
This is really nice, "but no one wants to hear a choir of one, even if filled with love" I love this poem ...
Chircop Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 12:50 PM
Sun drips her smile off mycheeks -Awesome..Love this line..and then 'Trying to catpture drops of sugar falling of my lips'..and 'Salt seeks her home'...E xceptional..transmitting mixed emotion of bliss and sorrow....Outstanding.
Devonshire Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 11:10 AM
If the choir of one can recite poems like this one, I'll be in the audience. The sadness in this song is overcome by the beautiful imagery, Tim. Nice work!
Turner Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 10:11 AM
Sounds more like "chirpin" than singing:) Duets are always better:) Enjoyed reading you this morning. How bout them PATS??
Trifiatis Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 10:10 AM
Mon ami Tim, comme c'est bon! Bravo! Excellent one dear friend!
Murray Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 8:47 AM
I would love to hear it Tim.
White Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 2:19 AM
This poem has so many beautiful lines: "Sun drips her smile off my cheek", "but no one wants to hear a choir of one" and so on... Ton amour... il y a un jour...
Callus Avatar
February 5, 2017 at 2:38 PM
Yes, Tim, love lies in the eyes! Who wants a choir when you can sing so well on your own:) Regards // paul
Smith Avatar
February 5, 2017 at 2:43 PM
Thanks Paul...not sure of that...lol
Allison Avatar
February 5, 2017 at 1:10 PM
Beautiful but sad imagery Tim I agree with Arthur that last line is wonderful:-) hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
February 5, 2017 at 1:19 PM
Thanks so much Jan
Vaso Avatar
February 5, 2017 at 1:06 PM
Beautiful, loved the last line!
Smith Avatar
February 5, 2017 at 1:18 PM
Thanks...I think I'm turning into Tim Vaso...lol
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