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A Choice

Jesus was not a choice He was thrust upon me From my youth He gave his life So I could live And find salvation And give and give But take I must For I’m a fool Certain to die And live like a tool But the Buddha He lived in between Denial and joy Siddhartha Gautama Lived the middle way Devadatta tried To kill his soul A Judas at best They both it seems Had the same goal. The Euphrates And the Ganges Both still flow And people Have loved upon Both banks So I ask you this question “How do I save my soul”? With Jesus or Buddha Whom do I pay the toll? To live in heaven Or back on the earth As I try to become An angel of mercy A Bodhisattva I’m not Though I’d like to Get it right, The first time I try Hear me dear Lord And tell me why?

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 8/15/2013 8:15:00 PM

It's amazing this world and its diversity of religion and views of life. This is a beautiful poem, exploring different paths from different perspective. . Always, Laura

Cherie Thomas

Date: 8/11/2013 3:47:00 PM

I Like the content of this poem,, its such a logical, way of thinking. I believe religion has done much good , in searching for truth & enlightened, faith to the creator, but so much bloodshed, torturing, social problems.,, continue to present, in the name of religion! Its a harsh reality to comprehend, the complexity of it all. Its a struggle, that so many including myself, continue to question. I Try to stay spiritually aware. I ask for stregnth & guidance. Peace always :) cherie

Stephen Kilmer
Date: 8/11/2013 3:53:00 PM

I wrote it hoping it would make people think about just what you said. Two words: Middle East. I think we can see what one religion interpreted three ways brings to the table. Peace, hope, and understanding. Kilmer :)

Karen Anglesey

Date: 8/11/2013 8:47:00 AM

A very philosophical view of the forces behind religion that present many choices, indeed. I choose to believe that Religion is created as an effort to make people believe in too many rules and rituals conjured up by imperfect men. Spirituality is the abidance of compassion and love taught by the ancient teachers you mention in your poem. I choose to follow the less confusing spiritual path to redemption. Yes, I thought about this poem that long ... have a beautiful day :)

Stephen Kilmer
Date: 8/11/2013 9:04:00 AM

Well said. Religion was conceived to tame the masses. I believe on must look inward and also study the master philosophers. I am just confused and amused by religious right. thanks for the comments. I have something more to think about today. You have a great day as well.