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Kimo
A post-Haiku poetic form, consisting of three lines of 10, 7, and 6 syllables. This form of poetry was invented in Israel. 

A Chilling Thought

the dog days of summer turn up the heat

         and when sweat drips from every pore...

autumn's a chilling thought


(Kimo)


9/04/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kauffman Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 1:50 PM
Yes it is Emile! Congratulations for your win with your very clever kimo! Blessings for you as autumn's chill arrives. Soon there will be frost on the pumpkins!
Pinet Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 2:27 PM
Thanks, Sam, I always look forward to hearing from you my friend, Emile.
La France Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 8:58 PM
Emile, congratulations on your win in my Kimo Contest with your beautiful poem ~ peace and tranquility _ Constance
Pinet Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 7:21 AM
Thanks so much, Constance, I appreciate your comments and the placement my friend, Emile.
Kendrick Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 2:52 AM
How I long for Autumn. Prediction of fall like weather this weekend though. I enjoyed reading your winner. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
Pinet Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 6:16 AM
Thanks, Sara, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Agustin Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 7:27 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Pinet Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 6:17 AM
Thanks, Beata, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 9:50 AM
Well deserved congratulations!
Pinet Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 6:16 AM
Thanks, Kim, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Dietrich Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 7:57 AM
I really really like yours. The last line is awesome. Congrats, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 6:15 AM
Thanks, Andrea, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Allison Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 3:09 PM
what a fun poem and pic,many congrats on your win Emile:-) hugs Jan xx
Pinet Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 7:42 AM
Thanks, Jan, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Evans Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 10:41 AM
So cute! A delightful poem.
Pinet Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 12:04 PM
Thanks, Marlene, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 5:03 AM
Oh and a much needed one! Love this! Fave!
Pinet Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 7:35 AM
Thanks, Kim, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Hankins Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 1:24 PM
So true and so appropriate, Emile. I always dread the onset of seasonal depression in the autumn. I come alive again in the spring.
Pinet Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 5:42 PM
Thanks, Milt, I value all of your comments my friend, Emile.
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