A Childs Wisdom (Short)

If I 
were 
a fish,
I'd tell
all my
friends,
that worms
come on
hooks
with sharp
pointy
ends.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Hales Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 9:06 AM
like it ... I have re done and finished poem please see what you think , sarah x
Culverhouse Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 6:25 AM
very cute and witty!! I love this!!
Neels Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 4:16 AM
I enjoyed this Kevin, made me smile and you are right... Only a child would think of this miniscule detail that us adults take for granted...
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