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A Childs Wisdom (short)

If I were a fish, I'd tell all my friends, that worms come on hooks with sharp pointy ends.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/27/2010 9:06:00 AM
like it ... I have re done and finished poem please see what you think , sarah x
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Date: 7/27/2010 6:25:00 AM
very cute and witty!! I love this!!
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Date: 7/27/2010 4:16:00 AM
I enjoyed this Kevin, made me smile and you are right... Only a child would think of this miniscule detail that us adults take for granted...
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