George Seal Poet Rhyme

A Child's Prayer

Why twinkle twinkle little star.
   I hope someone, knows where you are.
   If you are lost and need a friend,
   I'll pray to God, so He will send
   A shooting star, to guide you home
   As you seem small like me, don't roam.
   Today i heard my father say,
   That stars live on the milky way
   So play where other stars will be
   They'll keep you safe, like mum does me.
   Twinkle twinkle tomorrow night
   I'll twinkle back by candle light
   Goodnight Godbless keep shining bright.
   Send me sweet dreams til morning light.

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Barbara Gorelick May 11, 2015 at 1:59 PM As sweet as can be. Congrats. BG George Seal July 15, 2015 at 1:13 PM Hi Barbara, thankyou so much for congratulating me on this poem. George

Poet Destroyer A May 9, 2015 at 7:54 PM A blessing to read and remember. George, Congratulations In Kelly's "Twinkle Twinkle Little Star" contest. ~LINDA~ George Seal July 15, 2015 at 2:00 PM Hi LINDA, thankyou for reading sending me some very nice comments on my poem. Cheers. George

Skat A May 9, 2015 at 6:40 PM George, Congrats on your Twinkle Little Star win. SKAT LOVE George Seal July 15, 2015 at 5:14 PM Hi Skat,thankyou once again for your congratulations on one of my poems. I do appreciate it and thank you for being so kind. George.

Jan Allison May 9, 2015 at 3:29 PM this is charming - a lovely take on the rhyme - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx George Seal July 15, 2015 at 1:30 PM Hello Jan, it's so good of you to makesome very nice comments on my poem. Thankyou. Cheers. George

Kelly Deschler May 9, 2015 at 12:46 PM I truly enjoyed this beautiful poem, George. The rhyming is perfect! Congrats on a win! George Seal July 15, 2015 at 5:09 PM Hi Kelly, thankyou for your most kind remarks on my poem. I am so glad you enjoyed it as much as i had composing it. Cheers. George.

Jaycee Cervenka April 27, 2015 at 2:46 PM Lovely take on this. I like that you kept the same structure and this could be sung to the song.~jan George Seal July 15, 2015 at 1:26 PM Hello Janet, i'll bet my bottom dollar,well it is sixty five new pence for me,that Lyric man has read your account of my poem. Thankyou for your very kind comments on the poem. Cheers. George