A Child's Lesson On Love

I hear a child bemoan in dreams, reclaiming dreams,
His dreams he dreams alone of flying with songbirds,  
Picking and chewing, oozing juicy fruits in teams,
And dancing gaily, prancing to the tune of words,   
Diving, and drowning gleefully in pools and streams.

This child I see in somber moods murmur alone, 
Awaiting birds, his darling sisters and brothers;
I tip-toe behind to track this child’s lonely zone,
And read his eyes, his thoughts, to see if he withers,
Yet I do not see, nor do I hear ... any groan.

I sniff him behind to the valley, hedge and wood, 
And all his rainbow hideouts to see rueful signs 
Of psychic woes, or other fancies in boyhood,  
But I don't see, I don't hear, any woeful whines, 
Yet I see love, a lesson to learn, which I should.

*A 3rd Place* in the following contest (judged on Jan. 12, 2021)

Jan. 10, 2021 (Originally posted on Nov. 29, 2020)
Podium placing promise(6) Poetry Contest
Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand
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Dietrich Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 6:32 PM
Unique topic and awesome rhymes, Newton. Nicely done.
Ranaweera  Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 8:49 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea, for this sweet comment!!
Krutsinger Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 3:01 PM
No one can teach love as easily and effortlessly as a child. This poem was such a delight to read today!
Ranaweera  Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 6:24 PM
Thank you so much, Caren, for this impressively sweet comment!!
Kendrick Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 8:20 AM
Creative way to go for the contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara
Ranaweera  Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 9:23 AM
Thank you so much, Sara, for this immensely encouraging comment!!
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