A Child's Dinosaur

At the zoo, I was walking one day
when my young son had wandered away.

I glanced back; he came running to me:
"Mom, a dinosaur.  Come look and see!"

I looked to the left and the right.
No dinosaur, of course, was in sight.

Whatever could my child mean?
What animal could he have seen?

Past a crocodile, I and my son
 went running.  Could that be the one?

Its scales had a similar look
 to one in his dinosaur book.

"Is it that one?" I asked with a smile.
"Is your dinosaur that crocodile?"

"It's THERE!" he cried.  I had to laugh.
What he'd seen was a long-necked giraffe.

June 28, 2019
For Dinosaur(S) - For Children Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Line Gauthier 
Based on true story of my sister and her son Jon-Jon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Allison Avatar
July 6, 2019 at 6:00 AM
what a fun poem Andrea, congrats on your win ... I got an HM too:-) hugs jan xx
Walker Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 4:55 PM
Never thought that having told you about my son's dinosaur (giraffe), that you could develop this cute poem. It made me laugh just like the day that we were at the zoo and he pointed at the giraffe and excitedly exclaimed a dinosaur. I have it on a videotape but now I have it forever captured in words, thanks sis for being so brilliant.
Dietrich Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 6:48 PM
Thanks for the inspiration , dear sis. Sure hope the contest sponsor likes it. Did you see the poem I liked least that day I was writing in the car? It got POTD!!!
Godwin Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 8:16 AM
This is precious, love that it is based on truth, and it is perfect for the contest. I owe you so many sentences, man have you been on my mind or rather - woman, have you been on my mind. Please send me your summer hours, remind me - wanna call. Love ya and great poem, Andrea ... CayCay
Bavington  Avatar
July 1, 2019 at 8:10 AM
Children are amazing. None of them are the same. They look at life through Fantastic eyes with an imagination that at times astounds me. Lol. This is a good one.
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 30, 2019 at 11:12 PM
I felt that this was true Andrea. Kids say the cutest things. I need to write them down because I forget them even tho I think I won't. This poem is entertaining and adorable! I am sure it will do well in the contest! xxoo : )
Krutsinger Avatar
June 30, 2019 at 12:16 PM
Very cute and whimsical. Good luck in the contest Andrea!
Laurie Avatar
June 30, 2019 at 12:44 AM
G'day Andrea … from the eyes of a child. Very cute and plausible Andrea - Lindsay
Callus Avatar
June 29, 2019 at 2:07 PM
Children have an imagination of their very own, Andrea! I suppose you had some explaining to do! Enjoyed this:) ~ Regards // paul
Adams Avatar
June 29, 2019 at 12:42 PM
such a cute write! i am sure many kids think of the likeness between the two, it amazes me sometimes how they think! Good write for the contest~ hugs
Gondolf Avatar
June 29, 2019 at 10:51 AM
Enjoyed this cute write, Andrea, best of luck in the contest. John
Warrior Avatar
June 29, 2019 at 8:30 AM
Very amusing verse Andrea...I love Dinosaurs...still a big kid...sending dino love...^WW^
Pandit Avatar
June 29, 2019 at 7:27 AM
Kids that age ..always say something to brighten our day. Enjoyed the story..all the best, Andrea.
Kiser Avatar
June 29, 2019 at 2:29 AM
Sure enough, they could be descendants of a Brontosaurus. Who knows...well, a kid certainly would have a hint. Cute piece. Good luck.
Cunningham Avatar
June 29, 2019 at 1:30 AM
Love it Andrea, kids certainly make you smile sometimes, Good luck. Tom
Michael Avatar
June 28, 2019 at 9:55 PM
Enjoyed this... Well done Andrea...
Romios Avatar
June 28, 2019 at 8:22 PM
You go girl, this is a delightful poem for the Contesr. Panagiota
Anish Avatar
June 28, 2019 at 8:12 PM
Enjoyable verse - hope you and yours are well. Matthew Anish
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