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A Child's Day

School time is over Nothing to cheer No one at home Till eve, left alone Grounds full of houses None to play around Virtual world seems so real Reality is like a Dream Laptop sits on my Pa's lap Mama shoos me around Class work is a chore Homework is a bore I can't do what I like I don't like what I do I can't even sleep How can I Dream? Mornings’ can't even cry Mouth thrust with paste Milk does not taste I am back to my drill The slum boys out look better They play in open pools Like me, they look no fools They don't even go to schools Children’s Day is around. This Poem is written to depict the Angst of a Child in a Middle-Class family of Modern India

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/17/2011 8:06:00 AM
Hey..i liked the way u wrote...you just came down to the level of a school kid and exactly depicted how they think..:) I've written a poem on childhood days..Title: TUNING MY THOUGHTS...just check it out..:)
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Date: 12/20/2010 4:49:00 PM
everyone deserves to go to school. its just so sad sometimes. very touching dedication. take care, and i hope you have a wonderful christmas with you family. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 11/17/2010 6:59:00 PM
I like it. Very well done and a unique perspective. Cool style
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