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A Childs Concept

There was a little girl barely more than three. She went for a ride to the country one Sunday with her family. She laughed and laughed with glee at all the animals that she could see. Then she spotted something that before She had not seen. Now from the back seat came the cry UTS DAT MOMMIE !! UTS DAT ! There in the field was a tractor and a wagon. Her mother told her what it was and all fell quiet. Being that it was about nap time and she was quiet for so long they thought her asleep. Suddenly a cry rang out from the back seat. aaahh !!! A Twagon !

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Kash Poet

Date: 4/30/2012 11:57:00 PM

Haha...lovely poem Terry.Enjoyed very much.

Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/1/2012 12:10:00 AM

Thanks Kash nice to have you drop by. May a thousand smiles knock at your door. TLee

Tony Mccann

Date: 4/30/2012 11:32:00 PM

hehe...very cute, Terry...nicely written. children are awesome inspirations!

Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/1/2012 12:19:00 AM

Hey Tony thanks for the review but I bet you would enjoy " Betsy Was a Good Old Sport" or "An Evening By The Lake" or even "Awe Shucks" more than this poem about children unless you have kids of your own.