A Child Runs

a child runs
through tall dry grass
the snake slithers away
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Ray Avatar
August 24, 2021 at 6:50 PM
Great to feel the two different move, a kid and a snake in one scene condensed in a second
Achara Avatar
August 24, 2021 at 8:42 PM
Thank you. Haiku IS a "one breath" moment.
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