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A Child Runs

a child runs through tall dry grass the snake slithers away

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Date: 8/24/2021 6:50:00 PM
Great to feel the two different move, a kid and a snake in one scene condensed in a second
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Date: 8/24/2021 8:42:00 PM
Thank you. Haiku IS a "one breath" moment.

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