A Child Jabbers Spondees

Its feet are tiny dimeter,
Body, spirit, soul, trimeter,
Would you look at those ears and eyes
Whose tetrameter rhyme defies

Its foot with pentameter toes,
Smelled by monometer nose!
Don’t fret when its iamb voice speaks 
Cheerful quatrains for days and weeks.

Stand still while it jabbers spondee,
In stanzas of metered trochee.
Well, my friend, please do not pretend,
Or you’ll cause more stress at the end.

Each verse it speaks is oh, so sweet
For it’s growing Longfellow feet!
Sit back, relax, put on a smile,
You’ve been zapped by a poet’s grandchild!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Rodrigues Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 8:09 AM
A fun one! I agree with Andrea, my grandchildren are encouraged to be poetic! Enjoyed, James!
Brown Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 12:06 PM
When I click on one of your poems I know it will be truly exceptional James. Thank you for sharing your words with us. I hope all is well with you and yours. I will stop back again soon. Love, Carol
Culverhouse Avatar
March 15, 2011 at 5:37 PM
you are blowing my monomind...simple free verse mind.....LOL
Dietrich Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 12:23 AM
I would sure love for MY grandkids to be little poets. My Hyrum is enjoying writing and is only 8. Maybe he will be the one!
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