A Child

A child, 
like
a ball of dough,
must be raised to
achieve success.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 12, 2010 at 8:11 PM
WOW Mac.. this is a real treasure ... I like the analogy of child.. dough .. success all rolled into one.. beautiful..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.
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