A Chariot's Legend

They chase the wind
 zooming around, 
chariot- bound
designed in gold.

As legend speaks
 of war, behold!
While reigns strike cold
 two friends meet death.




Ride On A Pathya Vat
Submitted by Juaneco Torrente
Aug 7, 2014--- Chariot
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Nance Avatar
August 11, 2014 at 6:26 PM
What an image! grats on your win!
Guzzi Avatar
August 11, 2014 at 2:57 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
A. Sharma Avatar
August 11, 2014 at 5:49 AM
Brilliant take on theme juaneco n a wonderful win, big congrats!
Onclaud Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 11:15 AM
so well expressed, juaneco... i was blown by friends competing for a prize... thanks for supporting my contest and huge cheers on your high win.. huggs
Allison Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 9:23 AM
dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan xxx
Mehta Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 5:27 AM
Nice approach to the theme of the poem, congrats, Juaneco
Allison Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 11:26 AM
I love the imagery. Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan
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