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A Charade

A man's lying words had betrayed his happy marriage a charade so many words unspoken With her smile, his wife's love had fade a once faithful husband had strayed a bond had been broken April 17, 2012 for Tail Rhyme Time (Black Eyed Susan)

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Date: 5/17/2012 1:53:00 PM
A belated congratulations on your win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme Time" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/15/2012 5:04:00 AM
well scribed, rhonda... congrats on your win!..:) huggs
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Date: 5/14/2012 8:47:00 PM
You picked a great topic for this contest, Rhonda. congrats on your win!
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Date: 5/14/2012 7:59:00 PM
Congrats....well done. BG
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Date: 5/14/2012 6:20:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Rhonda. Excellent. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 5/14/2012 5:45:00 PM
Nice and awesome piece,Rhonda..."So many words unspoken"......Congratulations on your win in this contest.....
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Date: 5/14/2012 5:44:00 PM
Nice and awesome piece,Rhonda..."So many words unspoken"......Congratulations on your win in this contest.....
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Date: 5/14/2012 2:54:00 PM
Deeply moving poetry....so sad !! Regardless, it's good and congrats on your win !!
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Date: 5/14/2012 11:26:00 AM
Very nice Tail rhyme by you Rhonda.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/14/2012 11:22:00 AM
Rhonda congrats on your win..David
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Date: 5/14/2012 11:06:00 AM
So painfully well done Rhonda!! Big Congrats on your Win!!! big hugs, love ya deb
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Date: 5/14/2012 11:00:00 AM
Congrats on your win Rhonda xx
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Date: 5/3/2012 11:31:00 PM
you chose an excellent topic, Rhonda. Good luck in Susan's contest.
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Date: 4/19/2012 8:37:00 AM
The sun is shining bright here this morning in Ohio and I am enjoying reading some very interesting and excellent writing. So happy to see yours among the ones I am able to read this fine day before I get busy. Have a wonderful day and thank you so much for sharing your poetry with us Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/19/2012 8:14:00 AM
how well , Rhonda, you express the frustration, good luck, jag
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Date: 4/18/2012 9:08:00 PM
Very nice Rhonda, best of luck in the contest
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