A Changed World

new dawn upon us
yet dark world still upside down...
God's light shining through


NEWNESS senryu Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Beata Agustin 
Date written: 01/29/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Goldsmith Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 12:17 PM
Congratulations on your win. Yes, the world is upside down but God's light is coming through it all. Have blessed day....................
Alex Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 7:40 AM
Dark world upside down. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Ibeh Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 11:53 AM
Thank you very much, Christuraj:-)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 5:52 AM
Beautiful, Edward! Congratulations!
Ibeh Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 11:53 AM
Thank you very much, Kim:-)
Agustin Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 4:23 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing your inspiring "Newness" senryu. God bless you.
Ibeh Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 11:52 AM
Thank you so much for my placement, the wonderful feedback and visit, Beata:-) Most obliged.
Sands Avatar
January 31, 2022 at 6:00 AM
I love this poem, filled with truth! A fave. I pray that you feel God's shining light. I hope you have a nice day :)
Ibeh Avatar
January 31, 2022 at 7:33 AM
Thank you very much for the wonderful comments and visit, Heidi:-) I appreciate the fave!
Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2022 at 10:22 PM
In time, His light will come to dispel the darkness. Great job here.
Ibeh Avatar
January 30, 2022 at 6:36 AM
Thank you very much, Andrea:-)
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