A Changed Life

Once a man was caught off guard,
Crying like a child.
He was fat as tubby lard
And was sorta wild.

Took a woman of great wealth
His potential seen.
Made him lose weight regain health
Now he is not mean.



A form invented by Andrea Dietrich (a 7-5 Torchee)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 19, 2010 at 12:10 PM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration Marty. Love, Carol
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February 18, 2010 at 9:16 PM
I LOVE IT, MARTY. GREAT job you did. Thank you so much for showing my form and I hope you will do many more . this style suits your great wit and style of humor, Marty!! One of these days I plan to do a contest about these!! I know YOU already have a foot UP!! LUv, Andrea
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February 18, 2010 at 7:28 PM
A nice job with the new form by Andreas.. she is a sweetheart too... have to give this one a try.. its very cute.. Marty.. luv .."Sweetheart" #1
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February 18, 2010 at 6:56 PM
ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT MY BROTHER.. HOW HIS LADY CHANGED HIM (J.K.) .I ENJOYED...IRMA.
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