A Changed Life
Once a man was caught off guard,
Crying like a child.
He was fat as tubby lard
And was sorta wild.
Took a woman of great wealth
His potential seen.
Made him lose weight regain health
Now he is not mean.
A form invented by Andrea Dietrich (a 7-5 Torchee)
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