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A Changed Life

Once a man was caught off guard, Crying like a child. He was fat as tubby lard And was sorta wild. Took a woman of great wealth His potential seen. Made him lose weight regain health Now he is not mean. A form invented by Andrea Dietrich (a 7-5 Torchee)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/19/2010 12:10:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration Marty. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/18/2010 9:16:00 PM
I LOVE IT, MARTY. GREAT job you did. Thank you so much for showing my form and I hope you will do many more . this style suits your great wit and style of humor, Marty!! One of these days I plan to do a contest about these!! I know YOU already have a foot UP!! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/18/2010 7:28:00 PM
A nice job with the new form by Andreas.. she is a sweetheart too... have to give this one a try.. its very cute.. Marty.. luv .."Sweetheart" #1
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Date: 2/18/2010 6:56:00 PM
ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT MY BROTHER.. HOW HIS LADY CHANGED HIM (J.K.) .I ENJOYED...IRMA.
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