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A dying sun silently sinks from sight as misty clouds morph into a pink shroud. Shadows and silhouettes are still allowed, though indiscernible in the starlight. And beams of liquid gold pool in the night, where moonbeams peek through thick layers of cloud. And the chirping sounds of crickets grow loud until they are hushed by the moon's soft light. Strolling under a chandelier of stars, Luna embodies elegance and grace; a wizened sprite smiling down from above. And lovers try to catch moonbeams in jars as fantasies and wishes interlace; fueled by feelings of falling in love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 3/18/2019 1:43:00 PM
Nicely done dear friend, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve`~*
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/18/2019 2:54:00 PM
Thanks Eve, your support is most appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/11/2019 9:56:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Emile!
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Date: 3/11/2019 1:41:00 PM
Thanks L.J., I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/11/2019 8:32:00 AM
Back with congrats, Emile.
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Date: 3/11/2019 1:40:00 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/7/2019 9:16:00 AM
What a lovely image "children catching moonbeams in jars"
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Date: 3/7/2019 9:45:00 AM
Thanks Line, your support is most appreciated my friend, Emile.

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