A Certain Feeling

I wish I could
never
feel this way I do
as of now.

Its cold.
Its quiet.
My shoulders
just can't take this weight.

These chills won't
seize to freeze
and when I fall its because
the feelings blown out my knees.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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September 8, 2011 at 4:51 PM
Very nice...enjoyed reading your poetry today...welcome to PS...Marty
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