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A Cautionary Tale For Halloween

A cautionary tale I have for you. Trust no one that you see on Halloween, especially whom you’ve opened your door to. Trickery diabolical I’ve seen. One Halloween while feasting with a friend on Reece’s pieces (popular for treats), the door bell rang. Who knew it was the end of my poor friend? She thought they wanted sweets. Three vampires with one alien just said, “Can you come off your porch?" She was apprised of someone who was hurt and nearly dead. She left with them, then vanished. Paralyzed was I. It was abduction. After dawn I only found some blood where she had gone! Oct. 27, 2020 for Emile Pinet's Halloween Challenge Contest Words used: alien, blood, cautionary, vampires, trickery, abduction, paralyzed , Halloween, feasting, diabolical

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Date: 10/31/2020 4:04:00 PM
Hello Andrea … a verse to suit the occasion and it has the reader using their imagination - well done again Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 10/28/2020 5:04:00 AM
The spookiest part to me was the blood. It is one thing to disappear. Another thing to lose blood while you do it. Just in time for Halloween. Bravo!
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Date: 10/28/2020 12:30:00 AM
A very scary Halloween tale, clever use of Emile’s words too Andrea, good luck for the contest... Belle:-)
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Date: 10/27/2020 11:58:00 PM
This seems to happen all the year round. Lived your poem though. ~~
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Date: 10/27/2020 9:42:00 PM
WoW!Andrea, You used the chosen words and made good story. Just reading it “creeped” me out. Excellent job. It looks a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a good evening:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/27/2020 3:15:00 PM
Enjoyable, Andrea. It's perfect for this season.
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Date: 10/27/2020 1:28:00 PM
Nice job on the Word Wizard, Andrea. Your talent for sonnetizing any subject now extends to alien abductions on Halloween! I bet you never ate Reese's Pieces again, haha!
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Date: 10/27/2020 1:26:00 PM
Good advice, don't open your door to anyone. Good luck in the contest Andrea. Tom
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Date: 10/27/2020 12:33:00 PM
A great tale for Halloween with a piece of advice!! Good one for the contest, Andrea!!
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