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June 11, 2019

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*Tantric: becoming closer and uniting as one. Originated from the Sanskrit word "Tantra" meaning woven together.*

*Orgasmic: (informal) very enjoyable or exciting

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O, how I swoon in the ruby bliss of your sunset kiss - your vibrant rays of maturity arouses my fire; touching me with urgent rapture, saturating me in sparkles of champagne light - then, streaming through me in bold shafts of gold. We embrace in the broadening bloom of lantana skies - our burning blend; your western blaze my prismatic panes telling stories of love and pain, bestowing rainbow-shadows into depths of dark serenity - our fervor cast like water-colored sprites in far-flung illuminations across dusky medieval arches enlightening dim granite walls gracing graceful curves and conscientious columns in jewel-shades waltzing with your solar pulse. Our vivacious union reflects our Renaissance romance in mirrored mirages dyeing the staid floor in painted riches - that richly rejoice - in plashes of splashy orgies of light and silhouette - the appetite of holy ambiance whet by warm and cool tones pregnant with passions of the heart and imbued with torments and ecstasies of the soul - cleaving humanity and divinity in flaring flair; emerald, sapphire, citrine and garnet, amid our spellbinding moments of tantric twilight magic. Our synergy electrifies the night-falling quietude of this sacred space before our enchanted euphoria begins to wane.. and as your dying flame gives way to the rise of the shy crescent moon I lose my orgasmic zest to the evening’s ebony hue.

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Date: 12/28/2023 10:49:00 PM
Ah dear Susan, your way with expressing is so poetically eloquent and leaves me captivated truly in awe of the way you weave imagery using colors and gems and alliterations that enhance the beauty of your thoughts in such an impeccable manner. I absolutely love this poem and especially love the opening lines “ ruby bliss of your sunset kiss -“ clever and creative line that is soul touching with assonance, “ in flaring flair; emerald, sapphire, citrine and garnet” just beautiful magical! Fave!
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Date: 12/29/2023 8:49:00 AM
Dear Ink Empress, your poetic presence here is magical! I'm filled with delight by your gracious visit and uplifting comments. Your friendship and thoughts are embraced and appreciated! Thank you for the high honor of your fave, I am touched, my friend, as your poetic gift outshines the stars! Warmest wishes for a happy new year filled with inspiration, light and joy.. ~Susan
Date: 12/28/2023 9:57:00 AM
Very beautiful, Susan--lovely meter and diction, as you weave some profound thoughts throughout it. '..cleaving humanity and divinity...'--magnificent, like the cathedrals themselves! [My personal favorite is York, out of the 20 or so I've seen]. Como siempre, ve con Dios--'Nolo'
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Date: 12/29/2023 8:39:00 AM
Dear L. J., it's wonderful to see you! Thank you for your gracious visit and lovely thoughts, they add value to my poem. I love the way the sun illuminates stained glass and the story telling artistry of the colored panes in religious places like churches and cathedrals. I'm thrilled to share the podium with you and your exceptional poem "A Child's Christmas Carol". Warmest wishes for a happy new year filled with poetic inspiration, my friend.. ~Susan
Date: 8/8/2019 8:54:00 PM
Very rich imagery, Susan. Beautiful.
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Date: 8/10/2019 6:02:00 PM
I’m thrilled by your response to my poem, Line. Thank you for your lovely comments and for your kind visit. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan
Date: 6/28/2019 1:41:00 AM
Wow so much amazing imagery. This is what poetry is all about
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Date: 6/28/2019 11:48:00 PM
I’m so pleased you enjoyed my poem, Andrea. Your presence is uplifting and your comments are inspiring. Thank you and warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 6/16/2019 12:15:00 PM
Beautiful! Undulating between short and long poetic works you never fail to deliver, Susan. The relationship between the coloured glass and the sun is awesome...excellent imagery and choice of words. Although you have a unique personal style, you still manage to remind me of Keats. ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul
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Date: 6/20/2019 6:34:00 PM
I never consider a posting complete until your shining presence graces my page, Paul. I am both deeply humbled and truly honored by your generous appreciation of my poem and I'm thrilled to know that I (somehow) manage to remind you of Keats. You've filled me with elation, my dear friend. Warmest wishes and hugs always.. ~Susan
Date: 6/14/2019 1:04:00 PM
Wait a minute, is this a saucy sensational romantic poem soooo ooooh creatively expressed I'm filled with wonder, it's incredible! Other commenters are calling it religious so I'm confused. Whatever it is I laud you for this masterpiece awesome poetry which I could never write like this unless it happened to me exactly. Kudos pal!!!! Pls pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too.
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Date: 6/14/2019 7:13:00 PM
I relish your wondrous comments, S. zaynab. This is a personification of a saucy sensational romance between a cathedrals's stained glass windows and the setting sun. I'm so glad your felt the passion and heat of my words in this piece. Your comments and kindness are held in my deepest appreciation, my friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 6/13/2019 2:45:00 PM
ohh susan, i can so relate to this deep association with stained- glass windows...as a child, i would find a asense of divine presence through this lit prism... glorious incantation if i might say so!... huggs
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Date: 6/14/2019 7:09:00 PM
I relish your precious reverie, Nette. I'm so happy that we share in the soulful wonderment of stained glass. Thank you for your treasured comments. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 6/12/2019 3:56:00 PM
A truly magnificent piece my dear friend. One that sets a poet's seeking heart ablaze with its immense beauty, great depths and wondrously creative and insightful imagery. A feast to dine on in poetry's banquet of heart's desires, life's dreams, gifted words and artistic pageantry! A fav-- a true gem too..
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Date: 6/14/2019 6:56:00 PM
My dear friend, your uplifting presence and precious comments are deeply appreciated. Thank you for sharing your lovely thoughts with me, Robert, their insightful beauty inspires me, as does the honor of your fav. Warmest wishes always, my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
Date: 6/12/2019 12:45:00 PM
a poem of Love of the highest levels.. love that grows inside us from early childhood! The way we are raised.. the souls we cherished.. the values and the creed we believed in.. and most the beautiful aura we lived in.. You are a great poetess in the deepest of your heart and mind.. a beautiful soul as you are soul sister! Your gem is a cherished fave.. always an immense pleasure to read your amazing poetry.. my warmest wishes. Love and hugs.
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Date: 6/14/2019 6:33:00 PM
I've loved stained glass ever since I can remember and I do cherish its artistry and in some panes, its story-telling. Thank you for sharing in this beauty and wonderment with me, my dearest soul sister. Your generous appreciation is greatly appreciated in return, from one heart to another shining heart. Your exquisite nature, inspiration and passion shines through your words. The honor of your fav uplifts your avid reader as well. Warmest wishes, love and hugs always, sweet poetess.. ~Susan
Date: 6/12/2019 12:39:00 PM
Dearest Susan, what a pleasure to read you once again! You have your own poetic glossary.. you have your very magic! Your poetic wand does wonders for your avid reader! I always prefer reading a work of art without a note.. I love to get the impressions of the read.. I always prefer that wonderful mystery of the read.. Your astounding poem lends itself to many a reading and that's the Beauty every reader and poet aspire to..
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Date: 6/14/2019 6:23:00 PM
Dearest Besma, it is always an honor and a great pleasure to read and receive the beauty of your thoughts. I am elated to know that my poetic wand does touch my avid reader's cherished heart and soulful essence, it is a wondrous accomplishment for this humble poet and one that I truly relish. Your sensitive soul feels my own and I treasure your brilliant presence and your golden-dipped comments that add lustrous value to my poem...
Date: 6/12/2019 11:16:00 AM
Beautiful, Susan. Bravo.
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Date: 6/14/2019 5:56:00 PM
Thank you for the loveliness of your comment and for your wonderful visit, Line. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 6/12/2019 11:11:00 AM
They are magical....Almost like watching through time...Outstanding write dear Susan...Enjoyed it...
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Date: 6/14/2019 5:56:00 PM
Dear Arturo, they absolutely do possess a timeless and magical quality. The artistry of stained glass is as amazing as it is beautiful. Thank you for your wonderful thoughts, mon ami. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 6/11/2019 11:11:00 PM
Your imagery outshines the stained glass windows in most of the churches, my friend. I love stained glass. I have it all over my house in the form of lamps and lamp fixtures. I am fascinated by your poem. It is WONDERFUL, Susan.
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Date: 6/14/2019 5:51:00 PM
Caren, your wonderful and uplifting comments warm my heart.Thank you for sharing your precious thoughts with me. Warmest wishes always, my dear friend.. ~Susan

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