June 11, 2019
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*Tantric: becoming closer and uniting as one. Originated from the Sanskrit word "Tantra" meaning woven together.*
*Orgasmic: (informal) very enjoyable or exciting
Oh, how I swoon in the ruby bliss of your sunset kiss - your vibrant rays of maturity arouses my fire; touching me with urgent rapture, saturating me in sparkles of champagne light, then, streaming through me in bold shafts of gold. We embrace in the broadening bloom of lantana skies - our burning blend; your western blaze my prismatic panes telling biblical stories of love and pain, bestowing rainbows into depths of dark - our fervor cast like water-colored sprites in far-flung illuminations across dusky medieval arches enlightening dim granite walls gracing graceful curves and conscientious columns in jewel-shades waltzing with your solar pulse. Our vivacious union reflects our Gothic romance in mirrored mirages dyeing the staid floor with painted riches that richly rejoice in plashes of splashy orgies of light and glory the appetite of holy ambiance whet by warm and cool tones pregnant with passions of the heart and imbued with torments and ecstasies of the soul - cleaving humanity and divinity in flaring flair; emerald, sapphire, citrine and garnet, amid our spellbinding moments of tantric twilight magic. Our synergy electrifies the night-falling quietude of this sacred space before our enchanted euphoria begins to wane… and as your dying flame gives way to the rise of the shy crescent moon I lose my orgasmic zest to the evening’s ebon hue.
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