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A Castle of Temptation - Collab With Olive Eloisa Guillermo

 A CASTLE OF TEMPTATION - collab with JA Fraser

A CASTLE OF TEMPTATION

Proudly standing amidst three lochs, verdant hills
a Castle enciente breathing beauty but sadly chants 
passed feuds sparking battles having harried their foe
and it's demise caused by Frigates cannonball screams.

Colonel MacRae-Gilstrap rebuilds now redeemed:
stoned arch bridge supersede the sea highway flow, 
circular stairs and ceilings with coat of arms grants
changes made but its history today remains still

Tourists not deterred by ghost tales scary extreme
But await they exercise for imaginations to show
the setting, a romantic reincarnation that enchants
attracted lovers to celebrate their matrimonial thrill

Eilean Donan Castle in its stunning reachable location
pose the Western Highlands of Scotland a temptation.

Written by: Olive Eloisa Guillermo and James Andrew Fraser
8:46 pm; August 18, 2015

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 11, 2015 at 6:10 AM Huge One James, this the first poem we write in person... Im just happy we did.... like i said even before the contesr came up I am already saying to you ky desire to write one about castles... thanks much~~Olive Eloisa hugs!!xxx

Afolabi Muideen September 8, 2015 at 4:37 PM A well and a beautiful description. The flow of your excellent write depict imagery that intoxicated the readers....brilliant one......A.M.

Robert Lindley September 6, 2015 at 9:54 AM Someday I hope to visit Scotland but it will have to be after I visit Ireland first because my paternal bloodline goes there. Great collaboration my friends. A pleasure to read this fine morn. A7 James Fraser September 14, 2015 at 2:55 PM Hiya Robert, you certainly won't be disappointed. Thanks for your always kind words, James :) :)

Jadazzle United September 4, 2015 at 3:28 PM It sounds a wonderful place to visit james - good luck to you both in the contest:-) hugs jan xx James Fraser September 14, 2015 at 2:54 PM Eilean Donan Castle is my favourite of all the Scottish Castles. The setting is absolutely stunning no matter the weather. If your ever in the area, you won't be disappointed, hugs//James xxxx