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A Captivating Rose

A Captivating Rose A rose's petals are tender to touch The delicate nature is pridefully pure That blazing beauty entices the eyes While their thorns may leave you sore They hold a scent of carnal passion A deep perfume that dreams of love They dare reveal their hearts, like fashion That crimson glow is too beloved A rose will drive you mad with envy And transform your mind with greed and sin They will grasp your heart and soul As those thorns slowly sink in

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Date: 11/20/2017 6:01:00 PM
I like this poem about God.
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Edward Schmitz
Date: 11/25/2017 11:06:00 AM
I believe you left this comment in error. While I do have poems about God, this poem is not. Seeing as this was the second comment you left on this poem I believe you have mistakenly left it under the wrong poem.
Date: 11/20/2017 5:49:00 PM
Yes the rose has thorns, to me they are beautiful flowers, no matter what colour they are.Yes they have thorns,you have to be careful how you hold them in oreder not to get hurt by the thorns.
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Edward Schmitz
Date: 11/25/2017 11:19:00 AM
thank you for your comment. While this poem was about flowers, it’s also... not about flowers. Either way, I will definitely be careful when holding them.

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